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by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Tuesday, December 11, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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... watched as he faded from view ...

Image (c) 2005, Karla Dorman

... I had to let him go.  He said it
was time to find
himself.  He had to find his way.
And so, with a
sadness in my heart, I released
his hand ... and
watched as he faded from view
into the dusk,
until my straining eyes could see
him no more.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (12/11)

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Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 12/13/2007
Very beautiful Karla...and a moment every parent must face.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 12/12/2007
Deep thoughts Karla. Keep it up.
Reviewed by Randall Barfield 12/12/2007
Indeed, it is beautiful. Cheers
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 12/11/2007
This is beautiful Karla both poem and pic
God Bless
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 12/11/2007
The backdrop of freedom is a sunset here. What a beautiful place to give love free flight.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 12/11/2007
beautiful! my granddaughter and i were seeing the shapes in clouds just this morning on my way to work-
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 12/11/2007
What a touching poem , Karla, and the picture, beautiful.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/11/2007
A comparisont hat any parent can feel and fell a tear in the eye as they read. Letting go of anything of beauty is difficult.

Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/11/2007
A beautiful metaphor in a splendid poem!

Reviewed by Charlie 12/11/2007
...but he too makes a pretty bowl of gravy... Beautiful! --Charlie
Reviewed by R Beeman 12/11/2007
on the horizon of blessings your pen stroked a gem and an all too real sequence within many lives and loves.

blessings to you K.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 12/11/2007
...your quill has met with zenith, Karla.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) 12/11/2007
The bitter sweet moment in a parents life well captured in your write. Lady J
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight* 12/11/2007
And the sun sang...

Goodnight, dear Karla, goodnight
I'll wake you with my light.
The dreams I have for you
Will sparkle like morning dew.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/11/2007
Soul touching....well done!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/11/2007
Sad. Soul-touching. I can relate. Love and blessings to you, Karla.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside 12/11/2007
LOVE IT!!! Mighty swoons from this side of the Pond... I had to let him go hours' ago, but he left with a blush! :)) xx
Reviewed by John Leko 12/11/2007
...this is beautiful pen...and what becomes great poetry.
I love this write...
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 12/11/2007
This is indeed absolutely beautiful Karla , thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are coming your way, Rose
Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill 12/11/2007
Meaningful depth well penned!
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 12/11/2007
Karla, very moving,,,,as your photo,, nothing is ever the same each day, we all wake up to a new day.
Always, Christine
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 12/11/2007
I agrree with Jerry, this is one of your best! Love Holly
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 12/11/2007

Brilliant image and verse, Karla; a perfect package of sheer excellence! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Walt Hardester 12/11/2007
Brilliant metaphorical poetry here Karla.
Like Ed said, He'll be back...just look the other way in the morning.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/11/2007
But hopefully, he will be back!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 12/11/2007
Karla, this is one of the best poems you have ever penned that I have read. It is just magnificent and your wordplay with the title is outstanding . . . Stand. Take a bow. Clap. Clap.
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