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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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... watched as he faded from view ...

Image (c) 2005, Karla Dorman



... I had to let him go.  He said it
was time to find
himself.  He had to find his way.
And so, with a
sadness in my heart, I released
his hand ... and
watched as he faded from view
into the dusk,
until my straining eyes could see
him no more.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (12/11)
  



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Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Very beautiful Karla...and a moment every parent must face.
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Deep thoughts Karla. Keep it up.
Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Indeed, it is beautiful. Cheers
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
This is beautiful Karla both poem and pic
God Bless
Michelle~
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
The backdrop of freedom is a sunset here. What a beautiful place to give love free flight.
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
beautiful! my granddaughter and i were seeing the shapes in clouds just this morning on my way to work-
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
What a touching poem , Karla, and the picture, beautiful.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
A comparisont hat any parent can feel and fell a tear in the eye as they read. Letting go of anything of beauty is difficult.

Fee
Reviewed by E T Waldron
A beautiful metaphor in a splendid poem!

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Charlie
...but he too makes a pretty bowl of gravy... Beautiful! --Charlie
Reviewed by R Beeman
on the horizon of blessings your pen stroked a gem and an all too real sequence within many lives and loves.

blessings to you K.

always,
randy
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
...your quill has met with zenith, Karla.

Sage
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
The bitter sweet moment in a parents life well captured in your write. Lady J
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*
And the sun sang...

Goodnight, dear Karla, goodnight
I'll wake you with my light.
The dreams I have for you
Will sparkle like morning dew.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Soul touching....well done!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Sad. Soul-touching. I can relate. Love and blessings to you, Karla.

Regis
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
LOVE IT!!! Mighty swoons from this side of the Pond... I had to let him go hours' ago, but he left with a blush! :)) xx
Reviewed by John Leko
...this is beautiful pen...and what becomes great poetry.
I love this write...
John
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
This is indeed absolutely beautiful Karla , thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are coming your way, Rose
Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Meaningful depth well penned!
R~
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Karla, very moving,,,,as your photo,, nothing is ever the same each day, we all wake up to a new day.
Always, Christine
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
I agrree with Jerry, this is one of your best! Love Holly
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
*STANDING OVATION!!*

Brilliant image and verse, Karla; a perfect package of sheer excellence! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Brilliant metaphorical poetry here Karla.
Like Ed said, He'll be back...just look the other way in the morning.

walt
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
But hopefully, he will be back!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Karla, this is one of the best poems you have ever penned that I have read. It is just magnificent and your wordplay with the title is outstanding . . . Stand. Take a bow. Clap. Clap.
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