Accent Tanka (For Robert Wilson)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Thursday, May 08, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Well? How'd I do? LOL
Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman
Chased, she wined, I yam,
as pure as the drive in snow -
Wick id lee twist ting
her hips, she strut ted from the
room, her act sent a purr fume ...
(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (5/8)
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|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|You are so clever! Love it!
|Reviewed by Charlie
|Icon t)fig year-out that furs t)line, butt the rest icon--and its good! --Charlie|
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
|Wonderful and creative!!!
Sandie May :o)
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...wonderful creative work here Karla...
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|You are more creative than a Texas tweester. "Wick id lee twist ting", indeed. A refreshing piece of work Karla. Thanks, JMW|
|Reviewed by Bernice Lakota
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|You did ok!....M,|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Those days my brother Ed don't get anything after smugling that peyote from Chihuahua.
Nice tribute, though.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Very Well Done!!
I see I see!!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|So clever...I love what you've done with your use of words!|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Absolutely ingenious piece of creative writing, clap, clap, clap.........
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Different Karla and I do like how you stretched out the words, Thank you for sharing,
Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Quite interesting, and although I didn't really get it, I still enjoyed this poem. Very well written; brava, Karla~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|Cleverly done, Karla...Interest style with the break up of words!! Go Girl!
Blessings and love ~~ Micke
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Reviewed by Robert Wilson (Reader)
|Hey, Karla. You don't need Foxworthy. These are Karlaworthy! :) You invented your own. So many double meanings. I like purr fume, drive in snow. You ever been in a snowy drive-in? All more reason not to get out. Can't see the screen but who's looking anyhow. :)|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Didn't get this one, but I guess its nice...Ed|
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|Beautiful, simply beautiful. The pic a poem go together like two peas in a pod. Lovely write my friend. Love Bonnie|