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by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Tuesday, September 16, 2008
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... no color, except the mist of sadness. ....

Written for those, grieving. Including me.

Image (c) 2008, Karla Dorman

... all i can hear is the white/noise
of absence, of silence.  life has
gone out of ... life.  no color,
except the mist of sadness.

lonely.  so lonely.  feel forgotten.
how long will this go on?  can
only hold so long:  hands are
slipping -- about to fall --

can't do this on my own.  need
your help, God.  you know
what this is like, i don't.
can't stand the sound

of white/noise, loud in its absolute
silence.  hold me in your arms
and let me rest, knowing i
was loved and am ....

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (9/17)

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Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
Creator is closer to you than any living creature and He is hearing you loud and clear. great work
Reviewed by Jon Willey
-- you need only look around -- his arms are always lovingly cast about each of us -- peace and pleasant noise be yours to comfort -- JMW
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
eeek that's a most irritating noise. Grey skys, nothin going right, it's enough to scare us into a despondancy...Keep a watch out for a blue sky, take a photo, and when the blues hit, focus on what is still about, not what is looming overhead.
Hugs And love always
Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Juliet got this right, Karla, a psalm it is, a beautiful call to God in the midst of the storm. If anybody is loved on AD, it's you--Jerry
Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Karla's Psalms! This also reminds me of the ancient Egyptian prayer: "Protect me in all the empty places through which I must walk." Beautiful, poignant.
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
you have spirituality karla, in this world something is better than nothing, figure the options, we don't have many, touching and sincere verse, hugs
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Karla, your faith shines through in this one. It lifts my heart to read this, and brings me closer to God. Thank you.

God bless you. Kathy
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Beautiful, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Stuart McCallum

I truly feel for you with your deeply engaging and heartbreaking write, expressed with sadness. Please take care, you know where I am.
Wondrous poetess,
Happiness my friend, Stuart
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Karla,you touch me deeply with this lament,
i can're in my thoughts and prayers
Superb poem!...ET
Reviewed by John Flanagan
The pain in this gentle prayer is real and palpable and bares the soul, not just yours, Karla, but the soul of everyone who reads your great offering.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Deeply profound piece for all who are suffering and in search of solace for their weary souls....

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Too much hurt in the world...e
Reviewed by Cryssa C
This made me want to cry...all of the pent up emotions from deep within welling up and spilling over in a hauntingly beautiful way...superb, Karla! I hope that your heart finds peace in our Father's loving arms.

Reviewed by Rebecca Russell
I feel the pain in these words with every fiber of my being. Rebecca
Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
sadness pours through these words karla -i havent been able to see any tv, but i have talked to my friend who had to be evacuated, trauma and shock... - will go and read a little news now - keep well, stay safe Karla xx
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
My noises are pitch dark, bot knowing that you are my friend I don't feel I am alone...I hope you could feel the same.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
The Lord will bring you out of this grief; give Him a chance, and know that many people do indeed care for you and love you (me, most of all)! Heartbreaking write of sadness and despair; you are ever in my prayers! May the Lord comfort your hurting heart, and may He heal you, too!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Strong and powerful write and only those who have faced the ultimate depression stage can truly understand the feeling of just wanting to let go and leave it all do I know? I was there once too.
Reviewed by Linda Hill
May God be with you, sweet lady. You are in my prayers.

Many blessings,
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
life has
gone out of ... life. no color,
except the mist of sadness.

So very sad, indeed.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
I hope all is well for my favorite twins, will keep you in my prayers and my heart.
Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose
Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
I hope you and Karen are going to be safe. I still have not heard from my friend, Pier Tyler yet.

I'm glad you are able to write out your sadness and your frustration so you won't have to bottled them inside you.

Take care. May God bless you both!

Sandie Angel :(
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Your words speak of the sadness in your heart. Be patient in knowing that is His time, God will make all things right with your soul. Be at peace my friend and God bless.
Reviewed by Bonnie May
Oh my Karla, the pain in this write is so powerful that God must certainly hear. I saw the damage again on the TV this morning and places where nothing is anymore. Heartbreaking. Be safe my friend and while God's holding you in his arms, whisper in his ear, "Why God, Why." Love hugs, and kisses. Bonnie
Reviewed by Paul Berube

Your sadness overwhelms. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Hey Michelle,hang in there hun.Just keep having the Lord by your side and inside of your heart.Take care of yourself and keep your head up.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Karla you will get the color back with the help of the Lord, I know what it is to loose one you love, and the white noise tends to sneak up on you
In Christs Love
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