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Ode to Storm
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, October 29, 2008
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... No corner of my room will escape your careful attention to detail. ....

Image (c) 2008, Karla Dorman


You sweep in
like a massive broom
bent on cleaning:

Poking under the bed,
you raise the dust
of a thousand years 
on the stong back
of a lightning bolt.
You raise your voice
in a cannonade
of thunder and
shake the sheets of
Earth with wind and rain.

You tremble the rugs,
beating them with hail
until they sparkle.
No corner of my room
will escape the
careful attention
to detail:

all will be spotless
when you are through.

And when the air clears,
you rainbow hope
against the sky
and in my eyes.

The air smells sweet.

Renewed. 

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (10/29)



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Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 10/31/2008
I loved this poem, as well as all of your writings, I missed you, but I am slowly renewed, thank you for that
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 10/31/2008
Great imagery in this one, Karla!
Sheila
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 10/30/2008
Beautiful, Beutiful. This is sooooooo beautiful Karla.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 10/30/2008
Great explanation Karla. Well done once again my friend. God bless.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 10/30/2008
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 10/30/2008
Great lines as always Karla. I'll never cease to enjoy your pens.
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 10/29/2008
Skillful and fun offering, Karla. I loved the way you got so much motion into this poem. Did you get that cleaning lady's card, I think I could use her once a week.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by John Flanagan 10/29/2008
Karla,
Excellent technique and the multiple ways of interpreting leave the reader wondering and surmising in the best possible fashion.
John
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 10/29/2008
Karla, just when I think you've described weather to a "T", you come up with a new poem that surpasses the last. Great stuff! ~ Sara
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 10/29/2008
Karla did I ever tell you I LOVE YOUR POEMS??... well I DO!
Love, Christine
Reviewed by Juliet Waldron 10/29/2008
Girl, you could just knock these out with one hand tied behind your back! The Muses love you, Ms. Poet! :)
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 10/29/2008
Karla,

You import such depth of word meaning into all your poetry - marvelous!!


Hugs,

Lance
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 10/29/2008
A fabulous array of interpretations accompany this clean sweep, Karla... could be Spring, could be the next Perfect Storm, could be the ridding of germs through fever... unless it's my mind that's over heating! :)) Your images are always sharp and clear. It's true - you need to publish your unique, Stormspinning takes. You always create a clean air around your work. Good one! xx
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/29/2008
Karla, you just keep knocking out one beauty after another! Fantabulous!

Love,
ET
Reviewed by Charlie 10/29/2008
Outstanding poem, Karla. I think it may be stronger without the last line...what do you think? This is highly publishable... get to work, girl. --Charlie
Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan 10/29/2008
Sounds like good sex to me...

Rebecca
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 10/29/2008
And nothing--nothing!--escapes Karla's artistic hand.
Metaphorically yours, -gene.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/29/2008
Superb verse, Karla, and awesome piccy! GREAT job; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twink, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Cryssa C 10/29/2008
Your writing is superb...it simply comes alive. :~)
Cryssa
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 10/29/2008
Great writing sweet lady...take care OK...HUgssss
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 10/29/2008
I love your opening; catches your attention and holds you there. I also like your personification of the storm, even though I don't read this as a literal storm, but more metaphorically for a stormy relationship (but that's just me). Clever piece, well done! Best, Elizabeth
Reviewed by Bonnie May 10/29/2008
Wow Karla you created another Masterpiece. Well done. Hope you are all feelin better. Loves and hugs, Bonnie
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/29/2008
It does always amaze me that after a storm things seem almost revitalized and fresh again as if thrown in a clothes washer and spun out. Good write Karla.
hugs
fee
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/29/2008
A marvelous Ode to Storm!
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 10/29/2008
Yes, love it, don't fear a little sabel rasling from the skies, after all you are a Veteran and not allergic to a few shots with blancks.

Georg

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