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| Reviewed by Ray { Not a Poet } |
10/20/2009 |
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I know the feeling, when I was working I never had any time off to travel
Now I'm not working and have lots of time, but no money to do much of anything
What can a person do LOL , life is a vicious circle
Enjoyed the write
Have a great day
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
10/15/2009 |
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| Sunshine on my shoulder makes me happy. |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
10/15/2009 |
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| Concise and perfect, Karla. Magnifique. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/15/2009 |
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You create a real feeling. This is easy to relate to, Karla. Nicely done.
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
10/14/2009 |
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| There is a bit of a musical bent in this fine piece Karla. Hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/14/2009 |
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| I hope the sun breaks through, soon. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/14/2009 |
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If I had painted that cloudy sky, they would had told me that "it" would never happen!
Thanks for furnishing the proof that it does happen!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/14/2009 |
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Love the triology affect you use in this one, sort of a sweet play on me, myself and I for you are the weather lady.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
10/13/2009 |
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| Karla, this is clever and the title perfect! |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
10/13/2009 |
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| So THATS where the rain is coming from this week, huh? Thanks a bunch...LOL, Ed |
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| Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle |
10/13/2009 |
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Very well written and so appropriate for the weather in Sacramento today.Thanks Karla.
With Love,
Cindy |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/13/2009 |
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| well said! |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/13/2009 |
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| Love the poem and the pic. |
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| Reviewed by Paul D Berube |
10/13/2009 |
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| Great write with a great picture too, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/13/2009 |
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Karla,
This mood you capture perfectly, "...the sky, rain and me ---"
so many days I feel like this, it stikes a deep note.
John |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/13/2009 |
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| Great words pieced together, Karla / You have mastered the art of getting across what you want to say in the poetry medium . . . |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/13/2009 |
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Very nice, Karla, both in verse and in image! Well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(
Hope the sun shines soon for you!~ You are ever in my prayers!~ |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/13/2009 |
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WOW...WHAT A GREAT PHOTOGRAPH! EVERY ONE HAS THEIR DAY, KARLA...HANG IN THEIR, YOURS IS COMING. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey |
10/13/2009 |
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Karla,
You've described this all too well. Those clouds are so omininous, it's looks they will attack at any minute!
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
10/13/2009 |
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| Sure is a cottony sky in the picture and under a sky like that, I suppose I'd want to see the sun, too. Hang in there Karla, that sun has just got to peek through soon. |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/13/2009 |
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Karla, I think the Jersey Shore is preparing to
reciprocate with a bit of rain of its own.
Better'n ice. Another fun write. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
10/13/2009 |
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Hi Karla, believe it or not, the sun is shining in Connecticut. It was rainy this morning but the sun is now shining...it definitely lifted my mood. I love your poem, it portrays real emotions.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" :) |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
10/13/2009 |
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Raining here in Jamestown, but we need it, so I am not going to complain to much
In Christs Love
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
10/13/2009 |
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| Raining here in LA too. This fits the mood perfectly Karla. |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
10/13/2009 |
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Indeed!
A chain of events that can go several different ways.
Reciprocity is a big gurl word you know? (-:
Well done!
r |
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