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Forever Young (For the Fallen and their Families)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Saturday, August 06, 2011
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' ... They'll never age: forever young. ....'

My deepest condolences to the families and friends of the Fallen. I will not forget. :(

Image 2010, Karla Dorman

This is as old as we'll ever know them.
They'll never age:  forever young.  My eyes
tear up, thinking of Blue Star families
waiting to hear if they have turned gold --- if
this was their son, their father, their loved one

that died today.  Can't imagine the pain,
the anguish they must be going through.  My
heart cracks open, thinking of the Fallen ---
what were the last thoughts that went through their minds?
Were they of home?  What final words were on

their lips?  I hope it was quick ... Heroes, all.
Too many have paid the ultimate price
Freedom demands:  both the soldier and those
who love them. May we never forget.  Their
service and sacrifice is paid in full.

© 2011, Karla Dorman (8/6)

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Reviewed by Janice Beaty Hamilton 8/18/2011
This touched me... a beautiful tribute to all the brave young men & women out there putting their lives on the line to keep us safe! Well written... peace and love! Janice Beaty Springs
Reviewed by Jon Willey 8/13/2011
They are all that stand between our nation and tyranny and pain. May God bless them everyone. I bid you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 8/11/2011
Just beautiful Karla, my heart and thoughts go out to the families and loved one of the fallen...well done!
Peace, Carole~
Reviewed by Michelle Mead 8/8/2011
Amen to that, Karla. This is a beautifully moving tribute. God bless our men and women and their families in service.
Reviewed by Connie Faust 8/7/2011
So tender and touching, Karla. Yes, we need to remember and pray for these families. What a great price they have been asked to pay! This is beautiful.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/7/2011
A heartfelt write, Karla!! My heart goes out to those young soldiers and their families.

Sandie Angel :o(
Reviewed by Joy Hale 8/6/2011
Your poem touched me deeply, Karla; you struck a cord that flows ever more in my veins and always will. If you have the time, there are two poems I have written that you might enjoy reading: "Daddy Has To Go Off To War" and my poem on "Freedom". I enjoy reading poems that others write about patriotism and freedom and I enjoyed your poem very much. Well penned; a good read.

Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman 8/6/2011
Karla, your words and what they mean certainly touches my heart... very deeply.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/6/2011
Doesn't make any sense. The enemy gets away with murder and OUR soldiers get charged with war crimes or even killed! Heartshattering piece; may we never forget!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( +Tears!+
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 8/6/2011
Yes, Karla, may we never forget. =gene.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 8/6/2011
Excellent write, dear young lady...Ed
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