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Missing In Action
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Saturday, January 07, 2012
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Have you seen them, the words
that have abandoned ship? Have
looked high and low, over and

under, outside and in, and they
still won't show their faces. This
game of hide and seek is getting

old. Been gone so long I forget
what they look like --- substantial
reward offered for their return.

© 2012, Karla Dorman (1/7)

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Reviewed by Barbara Terry	1/15/2012

OH right Belle, like they are right in front of me. Karla I think the muse took them back to Mt. whereever. All I know is too, that I have a movie script to write and can't think of how to start it. OH MY MUSE, WHEREFORE ART THOU? This is a good write, Karla, and ti gives the reader something to think about, and that is a good thing. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world,peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie




Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart	1/14/2012

Oh they're still around, you never really lost them.




Reviewed by Patrick Granfors	1/13/2012

They'll show up plus they are their own substantial reward. Patrick




Reviewed by jude forese	1/8/2012

rather poetry be hard than soft ... have faith, it will flow when you hardly expect it to ...




Reviewed by Mark Lichterman	1/8/2012

Sometimes, at least for me, Karla, the thought of the words come when something or someone or someplace strikes my heart or mind, then the words come. Force the words and they will never come. Or when they do, they are not worth writing. Mark




Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat	1/8/2012

Karla, We've ALL been there. It will come back. Sometimes writing something about it makes it return, no reward necessary. Mary




Reviewed by Ronald Hull	1/8/2012

Based on your output, I would say that there are many many more to come. I think it is probably our desire to top each write with a better one that forces us to hold out until we come upon the right words to say. I have conveniently overcome that by just writing trash from time to time just to get the words flowing. Ron




Reviewed by Tom Hyland	1/7/2012

KARLA ... WELL SAID, KIDDO! IF 'THEY' ARE MIA - MIGHT SEEK OUT A TRUANT OFFICER ... WAYWARD JUVENILES MIGHT NEED A 'WHACK' OR TWO BEHIND THE WOODSHED! ALSO ... A PLATE OF COOKIES N' A GLASS OF MILK MIGHT LURE 'THEM'? MOST IMPORTANTLY, BE PATIENT ... 'THEY' WILL PROBABLY COME HOME SOON ... WAGGING 'THEIR' TALES BEHIND 'THEM' !!! P-A-L ... PEACE - ABUNDANCE - LOVE ... TK...




Reviewed by William Bonilla	1/7/2012

excellent piece Karla I just wrote a piece the first in quite a while Thought I had lost my Creative thoughts thought it was just a fad and my time was up mu words lost into the infinity of babbled nonsense I'll podt in a few days...... Love & Peace be with you William




Reviewed by Kate Clifford	1/7/2012

Time to do something completely new to stir up the muse.




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	1/7/2012

Karla first let me say I am so glad to see you posting again, and to say I can completely relate, great poem here as always thank you for sharing In Christs Love Michelle!




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	1/7/2012

Sometimes I find I have some extra, though they are rarely any good so I will send them down & maybe they will help...e




Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford	1/7/2012

If you find them let me know. Mine might be there too. This is a great write Karla. Namaste, Marcia




Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)	1/7/2012

I know the feeling Karla..Hang in there. Happy New Year. Peace, love, and blessings. < < <HUGS>>> Mikii




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	1/7/2012

Sooo good to see you posting again, Karla; I have missed your words here! Welcome home, Karla, welcome home! Great write and love the pic! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

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