A Prayer For Help
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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God, I come before You, on bended knee,
I've been so hateful...can You forgive me?
It started when I woke up this mornin',
A foul temper that struck with no warnin',
Yelled at my sister, it wasn't her fault,
She didn't deserve my verbal assault,
I made her cry, and that made me feel bad,
My mood went down the drain, now I feel sad,
My help didn't show up at work AGAIN,
I was by myself...this ALWAYS happens,
WHY can't the boss see how stressed out I am?
Does he not care? Does he not give a damn?
Sorry 'bout that...I just said a bad word,
A nasty one that shouldn't have occurred,
But dagnabit...I'm so mad I could spit,
Lord...I'm lettin' You know...I HAVE HAD IT,
C'mon, Lord, all I'm askin' is a break,
I have had just about all I can take,
What's wrong with me...am I goin' crazy?
Lord...I need Your help...WILL YOU PLEASE HELP ME????
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|Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
|Awww Karla... I hope you feel better soon. I know how stressed out our jobs can make us feel at times..but know that all things come to an end.... This will also...
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|You express your stress and heightened emotions very well in this Karla...and it always helps to spill them into your writing.
Love Chrissie x
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Karla and Karen my prayers are with you both and know your prayers aren't falling on deaf ears!
|Reviewed by Eileen
|No one better to call on when that happens, and by sharing you show your faith and God gets the glory, so I'd say this is an all around perfect piece!;-)|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Things will be better here with time I'm sure : )
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|i am stressin' out, too, karla..i am sorry for making you mad; you don't need that on top of all the stuff you are already going through at work! i would be better if i can figure out ad now and their new way of doing things; can anyone out there help???? i don't know what i am doing on the new site; it is greek to me, and i DON'T understand the new add-ons here! please explain to me in SIMPLE, BASIC terms, okay? any help is most appreciated not only for me, but for karla, too! (this is a plea to y'all from me, but it's directed at karla, too; she's just as confused as i am!) :(|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Wonderful. Wow... how I relate.|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Oh Karla, I fear you need a rest for a few days. This really emits the stress you are going through..Hope it gets better. Great write expressing yourself girl...floria|