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by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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i said i wasn't going to complain
*about texas heat*
i wish we would get some nice, cooling rain
*that would be SWEET*
the temp'rature is now one hundred four
*it's almost three*
we could tie our record, just a bit more
*four more degrees*
a front is close, but there's no real relief
*wind's from the north*
it's not helping--it's visit will be brief
***autumn, come forth***
i think i am living in the wrong state
*too late, i fear*
the heat makes me CRAZY...edgy...irate
***git me outta here***

(c) karla dorman, 2003
okay, i lied when i said i wouldn't complain!

the heat makes me a bear...grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

update: 5:00 p.m., cdt--106 degrees *that's too HOT*

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Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
too hot!

I could feel the heat steaming from your poem. Good rhyme and rhythn
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
Terrific write.
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
Have a cold one on me darlin'. At least your inspiring while your perspiring.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
I remember that heat last time I was in Texas......hmmm think I will visit in the winter! Wonderful write!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
That is truly hot ...
Stay cool.
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Big sigh! I know the feeling...(although this year I can't complain in Illinois, so far). Sending you cool thoughts!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
Man, I can't stand that kind of heat!!!! And you love Texas????? Hmmmmmm I should talk, here in Lompoc, we've had a crappy summer, wind blows all the time and it's been cold and overcast mostly..... I can't stand this kind of weather either..... sigh... when will I ever be happy.. smiles... great write, sis.... stay strong... oh, I heard that if you take a hot shower, it helps...
In Spirit,
Reviewed by Dale Clark
That's a way too hot! ;) Talk about melting, lol we're burning up here too but
not quite that hot. Turn up the AC!!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
TOO HOT FOR ME!! YIKES!! i hate the heat, too...COME ON, FALL!!!!! :( (((HUGS))) and love, your (hot and bothered) twink, karen lynn. :( *THANK GOD FOR AIR CONDITIONING*

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