104...and still climbing
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, August 06, 2003
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i said i wasn't going to complain
*about texas heat*
i wish we would get some nice, cooling rain
*that would be SWEET*
the temp'rature is now one hundred four
*it's almost three*
we could tie our record, just a bit more
*four more degrees*
a front is close, but there's no real relief
*wind's from the north*
it's not helping--it's visit will be brief
***autumn, come forth***
i think i am living in the wrong state
*too late, i fear*
the heat makes me CRAZY...edgy...irate
***git me outta here***
(c) karla dorman, 2003
okay, i lied when i said i wouldn't complain!
the heat makes me a bear...grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
update: 5:00 p.m., cdt--106 degrees *that's too HOT*
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|Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
I could feel the heat steaming from your poem. Good rhyme and rhythn
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|Have a cold one on me darlin'. At least your inspiring while your perspiring.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I remember that heat last time I was in Texas......hmmm think I will visit in the winter! Wonderful write!|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|That is truly hot ...
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Big sigh! I know the feeling...(although this year I can't complain in Illinois, so far). Sending you cool thoughts!
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Man, I can't stand that kind of heat!!!! And you love Texas????? Hmmmmmm I should talk, here in Lompoc, we've had a crappy summer, wind blows all the time and it's been cold and overcast mostly..... I can't stand this kind of weather either..... sigh... when will I ever be happy.. smiles... great write, sis.... stay strong... oh, I heard that if you take a hot shower, it helps...
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|That's a way too hot! ;) Talk about melting, lol we're burning up here too but
not quite that hot. Turn up the AC!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|TOO HOT FOR ME!! YIKES!! i hate the heat, too...COME ON, FALL!!!!! :( (((HUGS))) and love, your (hot and bothered) twink, karen lynn. :( *THANK GOD FOR AIR CONDITIONING*|