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lightning's dance
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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she has one
moment to
impress the
audience
waiting to
see her grand
debut--she
is a new
star in the
celestial
play; darkness
hides her; the
music builds,
leading up
to her cue--
you're on!--and
lightning makes
her nervous,
flickering
entrance; she
leaps from
one end of
the stage to
the other;
back again;
another
pass she makes,
dancing as
she's been taught,
against the
backdrop of
deepest black
she leaps--and
applause shakes
the skies--God
thunders His
approval.

(c) karla dorman, 2003
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i was inspired to write this today as
a round of thunderstorms--the first in
almost a month and a half!--passed
through the area.

the lightning was vivid and intense,
but o, so beautiful.



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Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
What a wonderful piece. I could see clearly the dancer upon the stage and the second in the sky from your own comment.
~Jackie~
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
this is awesome, karla; the imagery is incredible, and the last verse caught my attention! wonderful write! (((HUGS))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :(
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
you have captured lighting's dance well in poem as a ballerina's dance captures her audience
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Hi Karla,
Oh this was great...
I love watching thunder storms...

How is Karen doing?

Love & Hugs to you both...

Trixie :)
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
Fantastic imagery in this wonderful write.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Lovely vivid images Karla!!
I was dancing all the way with you!!

I did a "Lighting dance in ballet once...and that was fun!! you took me right back to the good old "Younger" days..

Hope it will cool down soon!!

i am freezing up as i speak!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Fantastic!!!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
You captured the moment beautifully Karla!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Wow!!!!!! This was simply amazing awesome piece!!!!! Love the wordings you've used.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Nicely done, sweetie. 114 here today. 116 tomorrow. [smiles] I would LOVE a little rain.
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight* Authors & Creations
I am awestruck, dear friend! This is marvelous.
(((((((((((Karla)))))))))))
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
We're getting that line of storms now, I think. I posted "Your Footsteps" today at AD but I will be taking some time away to recover now, but I'll be back. You stay inspired, okay?
Jill :)
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Most Interestingly So Good!

TRASK
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*
Karla,

This is an awesome poem ... thank you!

~Joseph
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Lovely, vivid images, Karla! Keep your head down! :)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Beautiful words and the imagery is fantastic. You lived around here you'd get to write those things every single day. LOL
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Wow Karla....I am really impressed with this one.
Striking piece!
Wow!!!!
best wishes always
from
kay
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