by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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she has one
see her grand
is a new
star in the
hides her; the
to her cue--
one end of
the stage to
pass she makes,
she's been taught,
(c) karla dorman, 2003
i was inspired to write this today as
a round of thunderstorms--the first in
almost a month and a half!--passed
through the area.
the lightning was vivid and intense,
but o, so beautiful.
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|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|What a wonderful piece. I could see clearly the dancer upon the stage and the second in the sky from your own comment.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|this is awesome, karla; the imagery is incredible, and the last verse caught my attention! wonderful write! (((HUGS))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :(|
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|you have captured lighting's dance well in poem as a ballerina's dance captures her audience|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Oh this was great...
I love watching thunder storms...
How is Karen doing?
Love & Hugs to you both...
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Fantastic imagery in this wonderful write.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Lovely vivid images Karla!!
I was dancing all the way with you!!
I did a "Lighting dance in ballet once...and that was fun!! you took me right back to the good old "Younger" days..
Hope it will cool down soon!!
i am freezing up as i speak!!
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You captured the moment beautifully Karla!|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wow!!!!!! This was simply amazing awesome piece!!!!! Love the wordings you've used.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Nicely done, sweetie. 114 here today. 116 tomorrow. [smiles] I would LOVE a little rain.|
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|I am awestruck, dear friend! This is marvelous.
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|We're getting that line of storms now, I think. I posted "Your Footsteps" today at AD but I will be taking some time away to recover now, but I'll be back. You stay inspired, okay?
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Most Interestingly So Good!
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
This is an awesome poem ... thank you!
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Lovely, vivid images, Karla! Keep your head down! :)|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Beautiful words and the imagery is fantastic. You lived around here you'd get to write those things every single day. LOL|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|Wow Karla....I am really impressed with this one.
best wishes always