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The Beautiful Butterflies Lift Me
by Debra Faulconer Baker
Monday, July 21, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Standing on the edge of nowhere...
Time stands still...Waiting for a droplet of rain...I am destined to decay...

Standing on the edge of nowhere

Time stands still

The Sun slip through the clouds

Awe’ I am thirsty

Waiting for a droplet of rain

To quench my lips

Parched from the Sun

I am destined to decay

In hunger and thirst

Left here alone I say

I raise my head in prayer

With my last bit of strength

Anyone I say hears me

I cry out begging deliverance

I must be hallucinating

A gentle breeze

Drift right through me

It feels so sweet

Awe’ and the beautiful Butterflies

Lift me

As if I were a feather

I wonder

If they gather

To take me home

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Reviewed by Lois Christensen	7/21/2008

Butterflies are our lost loved ones. I have written about them too. Believe as you do, that they go to heaven with us and come back to earth to tell us of our love. Safe and secure I am when I see a butterfly pass by above me and land below me. Angels, such godlike spirits of love.**********




Reviewed by Felix Perry	7/21/2008

Very serene in its beauty and also kind of soft and sensual as if the butterflies are your lovers sent to rescue you with a whisper of a kiss. Loved this one Deb, well done. Do you know that most of your pictures are not coming through? hugs Fee




Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley	7/21/2008

Debra, The Magestic Beauty of The Delicate Lovely Butterfly To The Rescue...Like An Angel... Very Lovely Feeling Of This Write Much Love & Inspiration Poetess Embraced ~ Embrassé Vickie




Reviewed by Paul Berube	7/21/2008

Debra, WOW! such a beautiful thought. Very imaginative. If not on eagles wings, why not a butterfly? Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

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