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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
3/10/2007 |
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Wisdom with stunning metaphors. i love the sea when its a certain kinda blue, yet never found the words to describe it..
Reminds of a film called Il Postino, wonderful poem... |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
3/7/2007 |
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Very nice...a poem that places one within the grasp of Nature and its power, as it shows the erasure of human work...
very nice poetic thought.....Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
3/5/2007 |
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erosion zone at its best.
well done, sherya.
peace,
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
3/4/2007 |
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| I really see the war between the tides of nature and our mind. Beautiful |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
3/4/2007 |
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The sea mocked me & said that I was vain
For I was immortalizing a name
When I myself, would one day decay
Shreya...Perfect ending...Profound truth in your closing verses....well done....love n luck....BHUWAN!!!! |
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