|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Wisdom with stunning metaphors. i love the sea when its a certain kinda blue, yet never found the words to describe it..
Reminds of a film called Il Postino, wonderful poem...
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Very nice...a poem that places one within the grasp of Nature and its power, as it shows the erasure of human work...
very nice poetic thought.....Art Sun...
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|erosion zone at its best.
well done, sherya.
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|I really see the war between the tides of nature and our mind. Beautiful|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|The sea mocked me & said that I was vain
For I was immortalizing a name
When I myself, would one day decay
Shreya...Perfect ending...Profound truth in your closing verses....well done....love n luck....BHUWAN!!!!