by sophie a merrick
Sunday, January 12, 2003
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It's dawning today behind a night
So long. It's a remembrance of goodbye's.
The piano is playing the most poignant songs
All for me. It's beautiful and sad
Right now it's all I have playing for me.
I can smile and dance slow to
Old melodic notes, still air starts
To sway, and I with it.
It suspends me in the atmosphere because
You are not here to hold me. I don't mind
I could do this forever, I smile-
I cry, that you won't be passing by.
All the love that is in me is for now
This piano-because it plays for me.
I'll take a walk to the woods and let
Trees sigh with me. (Will you sigh too?)
I am in love with this melody
And nothing else right now.
My remembrance has allways played
But I never turned it up, so I'll spend
My four days here, listening to a tune
Listening to myself
Listening to you.
This is about so many things all merging into one, and just listening to a song, and being peaceful-beautifully sad is what I was trying to get to.
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|Reviewed by Brian Morrisey
|Excellent song! Submit to Poesy! http://www.poesy.org!|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Beautiful song title is perfect.
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|A beautiful song it is. I "sigh" in remembrance and listen to the joy & sorrow.
Joy is found in our sorrow and our memories.
|Reviewed by john zimmerman
|a fine write about a special time,
a time of reflection and possible growth