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| Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner |
4/9/2008 |
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| A wonderful, talented write full of self-reflection and power as well. |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
2/27/2008 |
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The last few lines have touched me Jude, thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
2/26/2008 |
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Much to think about; much to reflect upon. Your words gracefully project themselves into our minds. Beautiful words...almost inciting, but definately exciting!.
Thanks - Micke |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
2/26/2008 |
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| Interesting thoughts leaving a lot to ponder. The last stanza is my favorite. Forward we go! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
2/25/2008 |
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Powerful and enthusiastically written piece moving forward at high speed. A little time out for the world to catch up seems to be needed, what a fantastic write....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/25/2008 |
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I love the message you wrap in such dynamic and eloquent words!
You jump-start my battery,and I feel like I now have all the drive
I need to get me wherever I want to go!Thanks Jude!;-) |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
2/25/2008 |
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Been running through my latest book for some time, but can't seem to reach arrival. Your poem reminded me that I need to.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
2/25/2008 |
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Wow very interesting thoughts!
I miss reading your words they
Always give me a reason to ponder!
I agreed with Georg!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and hugssss....Morning Star
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
2/25/2008 |
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| wonderful write!! The final verse is my favorite! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/25/2008 |
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A thought provokier Jude!!
Good to read you again Matey!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
2/25/2008 |
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...always written in light...I run to catch up with the revelation...penned in Moonbeams...of ones pen...who might yet arrive before me.
John |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Kopp |
2/25/2008 |
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| Hey Jude, I like the last three stanzas, and the closure of your last two lines. For me, you capture the feeling of stagnation, as in when we first awake. Then we have "to run" to get ourselves going and get the day started. Wow, my brain hurts from thinking. Thanks, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/25/2008 |
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Once again you have provided a fountain of substance for reflection, Jude. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
2/25/2008 |
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| This surely makes me think Jude. |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
2/25/2008 |
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Excellent Robert..
Our mind will play tricks on us.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/25/2008 |
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Stunning, thought provoking excellence in bold lines - well done, Jude -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Nicky Goodman |
2/25/2008 |
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Is it Springtime in America North? This is completely BRILLIANT!!!! Each line - i'm AWE struck :D ---> *faints*
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
2/25/2008 |
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As always, the author will twiested even more our labyrintic brain streets in search of those thoughts we haven't got the courage to confront.
Jude, you have a dangerous pen, and even more dangerous Muse.
You make us think!!!
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
2/25/2008 |
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| Interesting pen Jude,enjoyed..take care...Hugsssss |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
2/25/2008 |
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It rather sounds like you are already there; put your mind into park and set the break, everything else will catch up and the new reality will be yours. You have done a great job at creating a sense of forward motion in this piece.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
2/25/2008 |
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Jude,
Hopefully you're already there my friend. It was meant to be and if you're not already there then you shall shortly arrive. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
2/25/2008 |
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| BINGO!!!! SPOT ON!!! I know this feeling! Grinning from ear to ear.... WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Rabbit Jump Forever xxxxx Go do it, Kartero! :)))) xxxx |
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