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prayer
by jude forese
Monday, August 31, 2009
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as if earth could pray for itself,
 
and the core of its request
surface our heavens,
and caress our stars
 
where wounds
and scars of its present condition
scream out for reconciliation,
healing and peace
 
where its guts naturally bleed out,
eroding to form anew
 
transforming the surface
of its natural appeal,
upgrading a foreign landscape,
  
rebuilding civilizations
and reforesting desolate shores
 
as if earth
could collectively pray for its revival,
closed hands open to all
 
 
 
 
 
* photo by author

 

 

 




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Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 10/2/2009
mother earth is regeneration defined!
nice photo,
carolyn
Reviewed by Jon Willey 9/26/2009
Jude, your message rings with the clarity of a church bell on a clear winter's day -- a peal to which, all neath Heaven should kneel -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson 9/5/2009
If this could happen it'd be great. Our futrue doesn't look that promising!..Good poem of hope.....M ,, I like the picture!
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 9/5/2009
Earth preys better than prays.

Ron
Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle 9/3/2009
yes! and may not the pressed palms be simply the stilled frozen moment of a pair of hands clapping. Prayer is jubilant hope as much as it is desperate pleading need. You have captured its essence well in this poem.
Reviewed by David Hightower 9/3/2009
Jude - Excellent and heartfelt poem. I immediately saw the praying hands of the photo. Especially liked the lines:

where wounds
and scars of its present condition
scream out for reconciliation,
healing and peace

and the paradox of:

as if earth
could collectively pray for its revival,
closed hands open to all

Excellent! - David

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge 9/3/2009
I believe she does pray, and man tries to drown out her voice. Stunning work as always Jude.
Reviewed by Ankin Timourian 9/2/2009
Jude, I guess the message is if the Earth can pray for itself, why can't we...?
I like when you say a lot with less words.
Love, Ankin
Reviewed by OnepoetGem * 9/2/2009
a great piece of I had a dream verse Robert, but it would be nice in reality to have a utopia
Reviewed by William Bonilla 9/2/2009
The picture is worth a thousand words
Your words are worth a thousand pictures
Peace be with you

William
Reviewed by John Flanagan 9/1/2009
Jude,
Picture and word perfect.

John
Reviewed by Lori Moore 9/1/2009
Beautiful thoughts. Love the photo.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser 9/1/2009
This is brilliant and beautiful Jude!!!
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 9/1/2009
The earth is constantly changing--and yes, its as though it has a life and restorative spirit of its own. A thoughtful write. That picture is very provocative. I have an aptitude of looking beyond the obvious and as I stare at that picture, I see the shape of an Egyptian idol, and when I look further, I see small figures below. The tallest one even has wide-spread breasts. (Just the imagination of a writer.)
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone 9/1/2009
wonderful words and a great picture you have there. LadyJ
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/1/2009
Yes man doesn't like to deal with the fact that the earth can renew itself without mankinds help.......Civilations have disappeared....there is a reason for that :-)
Reviewed by Debashish Haar 9/1/2009
As if the earth has taken an anthropomorphic shape, and praying for itself, praying for the sustenance of life. Great imagination (in the lines of Gaia hypothesis), brilliant poem and photography!
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 9/1/2009
You delicately captured "Praying Hands" so beautifully in your photo, Jude! Thank you for showing us, with image and your words, that our Earth DOES speak to us in so many ways. I hope you have more of your images and words to share with us, dear poet!
Blessings and Love - Micke
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/1/2009
What mankind has wrought ... effectively penned and illustrated sadness, Jude. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 9/1/2009
Jude, This photo represents exactly what your poem speaks of. The Earth is screaming, Mother Nature is so angry at us. We must step back, and look at what we have done and become accountable for all of it. I for one, have been feeling what you have stated in your poem. I go to bed each night and pray for peace and light, and enlightenment of all mankind. When I write my Karena series, I am transported back to a time when humans lived in harmony with the Earth, a very simple but beautiful life. What in the heck was wrong with our ancestors? Why did they begin this mass destruction of our beautiful planet. It cuts me to my core.
Your poetry and photography has been very enlightening these past few days...keep them coming.
Much peace, love and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 9/1/2009
this is such a beautiful and indeed, thought provoking write-fantastic!
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 9/1/2009
Jude, What a beautiful formation, oh my. A symbol indeed to respect what really is not ours to begin with,,such a lesson here that I inhaled.
Christine
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 9/1/2009
Your picture is excellent, Jude and indeed, it does look like a "Prayer Rock." I really like this poem and the way it addresses the wrong doings we have cast upon our Mother the Earth. Even though she gives some of us a good shaking,now and a gain, blows wind and water at us upon occasion, gives us a good scorching, and tries to wash away the offense we have cast upon her, she seems, like, any mother, to continue to nurture us with her gentleness and feed us with her bounty. Great job!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 9/1/2009
I really like the pic Jude and I do believe Mother Earth has her way of praying. Thank you for sharing another great write.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 9/1/2009
Be happy that Earth can't do anything it wishes or we humans have had been here just for a very short time!

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/1/2009
I think in some cases Mother Nature has it's own way of rejuventaing or awakening herself.

fee
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 8/31/2009
nice pic, does looks like hands praying...I have no doubt mother earth sends out prayer vibes non stop :)
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 8/31/2009
Gaia photographs well! Her form more exalted than the gods. Natural geology captures hands clasped in prayer through the viewfinder. Environmental stewardship chiseled in bedrock from centuries of erosion of the forces of cultural decay. This is precisely what I was speaking of when I wrote the poem I dedicated to jude forese "We Built This City". Your handhold on the Rock is still visible, pulling the stone equine's to the heavens. Bang the gong, Jude! You write a diversified portfolio...

Love,
Sage


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