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| Reviewed by Alain Gracio |
10/2/2009 |
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I think this is dedicated for somebody here at Authorsden. I think someone likes you it starts with an A.
Cheers
Alain |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/26/2009 |
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| Magnetic, It draws the reader into the ambiance of created visuals ....M |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
9/26/2009 |
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| Oooo what a darling little pomegranite of a poem this is... fig-like too, flowering from the inside out; starting within the core and moving outwards. This takes me immediately to your two delicious Inside You poems of years' ago... but the tone here is pure Potent Sleep (which floored me when I looked it up and read my comment on it, given wot I just wrote you about...). I have absolutely no idea why I have recall over your work better than my own, but, from my canon, it made me think of Dangerous Sharp. All in all, a fabulously fruity little cornucopia served up in Granny Smith's best bone china, the way I like it! Mwah! :)) xx ... and LOL Ron's comment: no peeling skin this year, but have had trouble with scar tissue over the past three days, no joke! |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/26/2009 |
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Gives me the creepies... a bad sunburn?
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
9/26/2009 |
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Excellent, Jude!
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
9/25/2009 |
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| fascinating work |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/25/2009 |
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| OMG...!!! |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
9/25/2009 |
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| I like how this 'peels' the insulation off the synapses |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
9/25/2009 |
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| Your first three lines are absolutely magnetic - they pulled me right into the screen. I love the alchemy; the metaphysics; the intimacy taken to spiritual heights. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/25/2009 |
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one of your best..the easy flow but yet deep thoughts that run through the neurotransmitters like pulses of lighting...well done
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/25/2009 |
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| Quite thought provoking, my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
9/25/2009 |
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A microscopical love sure is bigger than no love at all.
Clever way to tell her/him not to start peeling margaritas yet.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
9/24/2009 |
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| Jude, this is so deep and has such an intimate feel to it. |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
9/24/2009 |
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| interesting alchelmy :) |
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| Reviewed by Ankin Timourian |
9/24/2009 |
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Jude, you left me puzzled, I am not familiar with the idea of bending molecules..., but I sense a profound thought and secret desire to unite...
Love, ankin |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
9/24/2009 |
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| I love the depth of the "embrace the disguise" idea. |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
9/24/2009 |
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Lubricious shapeshifting melting away the dross to get to the seminal fluid pouring into the crucible! How do you contain yourself! Wet dream of upcoming reality out of costume and into bare skin! Alchemically Inspired!
Love,
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
9/24/2009 |
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Sexually profound and exciting, Robert! In its subdued narrative manner, I mean. To be peeled away from self feels acutely needful, in age, art and human emotionality.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen |
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
9/24/2009 |
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| a sapient stalk flows through the inside story that centers itself eccentrically within each subatomic particular phrase |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/24/2009 |
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,,,very interesting indeed..to get to the core..great write
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
9/24/2009 |
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"Pure intermolecular energy relaxation of the OH bending vibration of water molecules dissolved in organic liquids"
Jude, You can bend my molecules anytime! lol
I just love how you say so much with so little...
I love your opening, "When I dream, I dream thoughts inside of you"
very stimulating and and makes me think of the saying "Sees right through you"...
Very deeply moving for me tonight. Nicely written and expressively taken.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/24/2009 |
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mentally surgical probe, Jude...
John |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
9/24/2009 |
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| How adventures, could end in an explotion me thinks, I mean, well you know, Blessings! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/24/2009 |
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Thought-inciting and quite mesmerizing in theme expressed, Jude. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/24/2009 |
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| Excellent. My Myspace site has numerous instances of showing the masks that we wear, but unmasking the molecules, now that is a horse of a different color, Jude. |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
9/24/2009 |
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Profound yet somewhat eerie. There is fodder for an amazing Halloween poem or story in these thoughts. Fantastic, Jude!
Take care,
Sherry |
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