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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
10/2/2009 |
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;-)
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
9/30/2009 |
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Haiku is my favourite form of poetry and you've written a good one here!
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Debra Bateman |
9/29/2009 |
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| I loved it Jude. : ) |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
9/28/2009 |
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| :) Sigh.....and smile. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
9/28/2009 |
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A great Haiku, Jude. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/27/2009 |
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Raised a grin on the man on the moon--me.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
9/27/2009 |
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| VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
9/27/2009 |
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If I dream aloud someone will come to put with a pillow on my face!!! LOL
Georg
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
9/26/2009 |
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| If dreaming is aloud, they'll stop at nothing next... and will there be weight loss clinics for the poor sun and moon? But perhaps most perplexing is the paradox of those two opposing camps finally getting together and raising a grin... are they frothy grins? To what are they toasting? the grin reaper who has finally curtailed the battle royal of dualism Time has waged for so long... so long... the sound is like a bell... that tolls me from thee to my sole self.... Adieu |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
9/26/2009 |
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Awww, and if you dream aloud perhaps it will come true...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/26/2009 |
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I liked the way this one made my mind flash on impressions of someone somehow actually dreaming aloud and in so doing felt a little bit happier because of it...nice one Jude.
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
9/26/2009 |
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| Ahh... To the ultimate Oneness of all things!! :-D |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/26/2009 |
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Oh yes!
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
9/26/2009 |
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| I love to dream aloud... for this reason. |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/26/2009 |
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| Great haiku ....M ,,Yes, grins are raised! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Diamond |
9/26/2009 |
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If you start off big you end up big
I like the enigma wrapped up in words
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
9/26/2009 |
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| Very nice! |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
9/26/2009 |
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A cool unique message here Jude.
Unquestionably a gem!
r
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
9/26/2009 |
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| ... and if you dream in silence, the clouds read your thoughts and paint their pictures throughout the heavens, raising eyebrows from east to west (or from ear to ear??!) :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/26/2009 |
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| whimsical delight... |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
9/26/2009 |
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Splendid haiku!
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
9/26/2009 |
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Is it the vibrations in our minds that exagerate the globes? Whatever, it works...as does your de-lightful KU, Jude! Imagery...
Blessings and Love - Micke |
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
9/26/2009 |
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Great haiku Jude. They take talent to write. I haven't reached that plateau yet but admire anyone who has mastered the discipline.
Marcia
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
9/26/2009 |
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Nothing that compares to coming up after going down...moonstone compliments sunrays yin and yang dream tang...
Love & Love,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/26/2009 |
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Indeed, Jude, beautiful.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
9/26/2009 |
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| This is so beautiful... |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
9/26/2009 |
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This is wonderful, Jude. As I read the last line, I realized that the variant of rays in the place of raise would still make (nearly)
perfect sense.
Take care,
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/26/2009 |
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Ab-so-lutely . . . and . . .
if you dream aloud
and shun all the naysayers
eureka awaits |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
9/26/2009 |
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| I especially love your first two lines. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
9/26/2009 |
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Dreaming whether it be day dreaming or night dreaming always makes me grin. :) I am grinning...
Lovely Haiku,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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