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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
10/17/2009 |
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a fantastic flight of passion, jude!
cg
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
10/9/2009 |
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so wonderfully playful and alluring
this is a dance to move to
thanks miss this so..... |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/9/2009 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/8/2009 |
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"when i gaze into your eyes,
they lift and swirl
into a whirlwind of introspective motion."
A wonderful love. |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
10/8/2009 |
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34-28-36! Shape of things to come. The perfect cosmic woman is waiting in galactic tides, her curves powdered with moondust. This one fuels a quasar...
Love,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/8/2009 |
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Not to throw you a curve, but that was some orgasm.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Ankin Timourian |
10/7/2009 |
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I love this one, as well as all the other ones. I love hidden desire in you and the fact that you quietly following her curves...
Wonderful poem, enjoyed very much especially 'the emotional nebula of your thoughts.
Hugs, Ankin |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/7/2009 |
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| love it! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/7/2009 |
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| Sincerity shines from within...wonderful Jude! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/7/2009 |
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You have so many curves to your brilliant mind with which to use
any angle,add to that your celestial knowledge and Casanova heritage,you can't help but mesmerize us with your ravishing romantic poems. ("our cosmic conviction",sounds familiar;-) |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone |
10/7/2009 |
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| nicely penned, LadyJ |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/7/2009 |
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And then man invented heels. lol. I like how many of your word choices - wormhole, twisting, turning, whirlwind, swirl - seem to emphasize the title. Some great, cosmic imagery here. Fun ending. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Leslie Hoffman |
10/7/2009 |
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| The depth of love you feel for your lady is beautifully expressed in this poem. ~leslie |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/7/2009 |
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| …so that’s why blokes open the door for women to pass through ahead of them! :)) But surely the passion you speak of here is born from deep within, rather than from without… I love the subtle shifts in this piece, Jude, which focus outwards through universal time, space and mutual experience in the first half, then inwards to the specific/personal in the second. When kindred spirits share the same macro-canvas, it makes for satisfying relationships where all shared paths lead into one. And you use beautifully shape-shifting diction – first abstract, then very clear and controlled – to express these warm concepts founded on percepts. The core of this for me centres on the timeframes, from the opening “light years have passed us by” to the moment “when I gaze into your eyes” and on to “remain(ing) not too far behind”, there seeming to be an ellipse like an unravelling timeline of DNA running through your thoughts, a continuum connecting past, present and future. I guess my mind is still working with impressions from the Annette Messager exhibition, juxtaposing the bizarre with the baby-soft, of which your images here remind. And thinking again of Steve Prosser and his “barrel-lore”, ideas resound with my old poem Going Over Niagara, too… You’ve got us all at this Designing Thoughts-lark, Kartero, poetic engineer that you are! Lots of Windy Light in this one, “releasing us from the gale of forgotten memories Reminding us to pronounce The legacy of life’s lexis Upon the parchment of inspired hopes And illuminated ideals” – I like! hurryKane Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
10/7/2009 |
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| I feel like I'm being repetitive; so, I'll attack this from another angle. I am amazed at how you continue to turn out quality poetry one after the other. Each one a gem unto itself. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
10/7/2009 |
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| Curves of a woman, curves of the shoreline, curves in life. Eloquently penned Jude. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/7/2009 |
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Very expressive and with perfect symetry of thought. I think all poets and romantics do share a common train of thought that is like links in a giant chain...sooner or later the links must come together to form a whole.
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
10/7/2009 |
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Dreamy passion that has spanned eons, it just doesn't get any more romantic than that. Enticing write, Jude, that stirs emotions and collective thoughts. This offering is a subtle confirmation that perhaps those feelings are real and we aren't just crazy. ;)
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
10/7/2009 |
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| Passionate writing done in "Jude" style...I do love your use of language! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/7/2009 |
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| Ah, and aren't those connecting curves a marvel to behold. |
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| Reviewed by Nicky Goodman |
10/7/2009 |
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| I'm admiring all your connecting curves jude - how you put your words together makes me whistle! Lovely expression :) |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/7/2009 |
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An astral being remembering a soul mate in a non-universe parallel only to his pulsating pupils following connecting curves.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
10/6/2009 |
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| a bit gushy for my taste, but I can see appreciate how the intensity of emotion sweeps you away in this one. |
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| Reviewed by Debra Bateman |
10/6/2009 |
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An excellent poem Jude.
Thanks for sharing. : ) |
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
10/6/2009 |
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...'sharing the distance' denotes this artful masterpiece expression our interrelated connection to all things... even and especially for this piece, 'revealing hidden desires...growing from the emotional nebula of your thoughts...'
Well done encore Dear Jude!! :-D |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
10/6/2009 |
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Such mystical passion in these words, you really know how to raise the blood pressure! The ladies will really love this one!
Your last three lines did it for me. Wow, totally orgasmic thoughts running all over my mind after this read.
You have really out done yourself with this one. Way to go thanks for the fuel for my dreams tonight Jude! :)
Peace, love, and light, my dear friend,
Amber "V"
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