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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
10/17/2009 |
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getting into those unknown spaces is life's journey defined...
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
10/14/2009 |
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The beauty of such a moment would be hard to explain...but you've just explained it!
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| Reviewed by Ankin Timourian |
10/14/2009 |
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I am fascinated with your unique thoughts...
hugs, Ankin |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone |
10/14/2009 |
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| a simple write well done. LadyJ |
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| Reviewed by Leslie Hoffman |
10/13/2009 |
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A visitant most rare that feels otherworldly.
Beautifully penned. ~leslie |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/12/2009 |
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I like my wavelengths cooked. Illuminating poem.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
10/12/2009 |
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| love can be so blinding! well said |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/11/2009 |
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| You are in another dimension where everything is of a higher quality, like a heavenly concept of divine relationship beyond earths knowledge beautifully sensually sublime and prescient...kudo's |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
10/11/2009 |
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| This feels like an intellectual and spiritual connection, and a reservedly lustful desire to know more, to delve more, to experience an entirety of being. |
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| Reviewed by George Ellison (Reader) |
10/11/2009 |
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| You have an interesting and unique quality to your writing. |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/11/2009 |
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| Wonderful love and devotion. |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
10/11/2009 |
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| cool one Robert, smooth as a babies bottom |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
10/11/2009 |
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| there is a gentleness here, very comforting embracing read :) thank you |
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| Reviewed by Don Juan Amante |
10/11/2009 |
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| a one of a kind experience, well penned |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/11/2009 |
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Deeply effecting, profound lines, Jude - very well penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/11/2009 |
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| ... funny that Jeanette mentions "captivating", since your poem Captivated comes instantly to mind here... in fact, a whole series of like poems that are from October 2006. Raw, emancipated and triumphant, the clarity in your tone (albeit one of awe, wonder and fascination) pierces all darkness and summons all energies together in its vibrant proclamation. It conjures to me a kind of "Eureka!" moment that comes when there has been a slow-build of awareness and information gathering, but this is now become consolidated and totally without shadow of a doubt, as articulated by the incontrovertible persuasion of your beautiful last couplet. Visually and conceptually stunning, this is an arrow that directly links two unveiled hearts. Truth, by its inherent nature, is ALWAYS self-revealing come the right time and space; it cannot remain forever hidden. Some things just ARE and can't be manipulated, manufactured, influenced or changed. The Dream becomes Reality... the Dream IS, in fact, Reality because it is, in nature, a lucid dream, one that is known to be happening in actuality even while we "dream" it. The membrance between conscious states this poem slips between has been worn to total transparency and is as the dazzling reflection of clear glass. Brilliant and beaming - it's so goooooooood to see you smile, Kartero! :)) Kuasar Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
10/11/2009 |
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This sounds like the voice of devotion. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
10/11/2009 |
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| You drew some good images in this poem. It makes me think of you (or someone) walking into another's captivating aura in awestruck fascination. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/11/2009 |
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| VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/11/2009 |
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Electric blue, intense, mesmerizing, hypnotic, the poet writes with the eyes of a moth looking at the flame of a candle...
Georg
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
10/11/2009 |
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| Jude, I too, feel this on a spiritual level. Powerful writing that touches from the inside. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/10/2009 |
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Nicely done Jude and I think Amber is flying with the spirit of your write under the power of the night...well done.
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
10/10/2009 |
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Jude, this is a masterpiece! We are definitely on the same wave length, see my Indigo poem. Wow, what is it about the cosmos tonight, I am feeling powerful energy. Somehow dreams shared can be quite powerful. There is a shift in the Universe can you feel it? I am stir crazy this evening, wishing I was somewhere else right now. I shall go and meditate more and conjure up some magical visions.
Peace, love, and light, dear man, I love this poem it really is magical for me, anyway.
Amber :) |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
10/10/2009 |
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| The scintillating lore of the unknown beckons to the curious. Nicely done! |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
10/10/2009 |
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If you are writing this about a woman, watch out, Jude, she is definitely one who is already getting under your skin. I love this offering and I love the feelings that it stirs in me. Makes me want to fall in love with someone very special again...the search is on!!! LOL
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/10/2009 |
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Jude,
I read this as a form of prayer, an acknowledgement of a presence, a spiritual dimension with all its power and influence, and the final line affirms wonderfully.
John
PS: this I can read perfectly |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/10/2009 |
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| Such a stellar-like cry for recognition is this piece. The images of being surrounded and infused by the emission is very real. |
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