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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
11/13/2009 |
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I can relate here. Just got a new umbrella for walking the dogs in the rain. I think I use it more for them than I do for myself. This poem is life in motion. Well done:)
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
11/8/2009 |
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| LOL!! :)) I know how you love a good Gene Kelly rainstorm, Kartero. But the old "slicker" might provide a whole lot more useful coverage than a breached psychic umbrella when fleeing the assault of those unwanted polka dots of sky (even when they might desire to flood you in order to cleanse and soothe). Think Auguste Cot would approve anyways! xx |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
11/4/2009 |
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As aptly proved, the weather is fickle... Better than drops of Jupiter.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
11/3/2009 |
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I illustrated this poem. The funnest part was coloring your hair!
s |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone |
11/3/2009 |
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| Can't live with it, can't live with out it. Good little write. LadyJ |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
11/3/2009 |
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| i enjoy smiling at mother nature, she has a way with the weather :) |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
11/3/2009 |
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Sounds as though mother nature is having a little fun with the blue polka dots. I find this this uplifting myself as rain is one of my favorite things.
Good to be back and reading you again Jude.
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
11/3/2009 |
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A much different write from you Jude but enjoyed nonetheless. Inspiriation can be found in almost anything for one as gifted as you.
"hugs"
Marcia |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
11/3/2009 |
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| This is a really cool poem. The only time I know for sure that it will rain is when my favorite baseball team is in the process of a pulling off a major upset and it's the third inning. |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
11/3/2009 |
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Teased eh? Like a day in the life here.
It tickles me what can muse the poets mind.
Enjoyed!
r
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/3/2009 |
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Such inspiration from special moments so well-shared via your verses, Jude. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
11/3/2009 |
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| Someone up there is just waiting, and them drop are tears of laughter, when again you got caught, nice one Jude! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
11/3/2009 |
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| A terrific experiential write. It happened to me, too. |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
11/3/2009 |
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been there, jude!
yet, waltzing in the rain beats tip-toeing on black ice ;-)
be well,
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/3/2009 |
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| i like this-light it made me smile |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
11/3/2009 |
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Around here, this time of the year, using an umbrella will change you into an instant Mary Poppins! Bye-bye!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/3/2009 |
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to hell with umbrellas
I decided that long ago; I feel strangely free now, like my dogs. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
11/3/2009 |
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| I guess that is the difference in peoples makeup, Jude, I hardly ever carry my umbrella "in case of rain." Actually, like Amber, I love the weeping of the sky. |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
11/3/2009 |
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So Jude you go to the dollarstore and buy one of those Ponchos that fold up the size of an envelope, no problem, don't you know it is when you aren't prepared it always rains. A great write Jude.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
11/3/2009 |
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First, let me say that I love the title of this poem. It seems that it would be a great challenge to have people write a poem with that title and see what it would become. The poem is great, so human and so everyday life. No matter what we prepare for, chances are that life will throw us a curve ball.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/3/2009 |
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Me, I'll grab a cab but I do know what you are saying Jude.
fee |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
11/3/2009 |
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| A Pam Ayers and/or PG Wodehouse moment. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
11/2/2009 |
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| Isn't that always the way?! Jude, I love how you've written this and I like the touches of humor. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
11/2/2009 |
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Jude, I prefer to walk in the rain, getting lost in it's scent and cleansing ability...I do get wet quite often, but my body and soul just drinks in it. Next time, just let the rain fall and see what it is like to really take a walk in the rain. I love that you ended with a bit of humorous lines, perhaps looking through those holes you can see with new vision and insight. It is with much peace, love, and light that I send to you this evening..Love to read you again. you have been missed.
Amber "V" :) |
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