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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
4/19/2012 |
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I get the image of an internet vixen.
:) Janna |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
4/18/2012 |
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| This is quite marvelous how you portray the quest, the struggle and sophistocated irony of the ravishment! Yikes! |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/18/2012 |
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I wonder why only women are portrayed as spiders. Perhaps it is because it is only the female spider, in many cases, that is the killer, like the black widow. Close-up, some spiders are hideous to behold. That too, may play a part, along with the idea that the wrapped up carcass is reduced to spider food by the poison injected. Yummy!
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
4/18/2012 |
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| Very seductive. You must have gotten lucky last night. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
4/18/2012 |
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Jude,
What a great, sultry feel to this poem! Perfectly composed.
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
4/18/2012 |
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| this web you you've spun of silky feminine seduction captures the imagination in a matrix of intrigue - arachnid or human the parallels are are intriguing - you cab spin one of these poems daily jude and I enjoy each and every one - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
4/17/2012 |
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Sensual spins of silk!!!
*Jude* Beware the black widow!!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
4/17/2012 |
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| excellent! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
4/17/2012 |
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| Delicious catch..for both? |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
4/17/2012 |
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From her alure and charm to her fatal bite, she never loses focus of her intended goal. I have known many spiders some with two legs and some with eight; both possess many of the same qualities.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
4/17/2012 |
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| Yup, I've had my head bitten off by such a femanimal spider. |
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| Reviewed by neerja gandhi |
4/16/2012 |
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| nicely done.. best wishes,,,neerja |
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| Reviewed by T Jett |
4/16/2012 |
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| to be bound in her silky web and have her way! ;) Then again, I'm not a fan of spiders ... Great poem, Jude ... |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
4/16/2012 |
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Hey Jude
Spiderette um, sounds to me like you are wanting to get caught up into an erotic web, there are many ways to interpret this one, I love the inuendos and the continued intrigue this poem exudes.
Never get trapped in something you may not be able to handle......... :)~
Peace, light, and love
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
4/16/2012 |
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| All these lines spin images for me and so superbly done |
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| Reviewed by Tom Hyland |
4/16/2012 |
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HEY - JUDE ...
SPIDER-ETTE ... PERHAPS THE YOUNG OFF-SPRING OF A 'BLACK WIDOW' ?
AND AS A 'TEENAGER ... PERHAPS JUST IN TRAINING ... BEFORE 'MEATING' HER SPOUSE? ...
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
4/16/2012 |
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| sticky, amazing creatures |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
4/16/2012 |
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| Anyone observing spiders knows you nailed it in the word "gyrating," so Amen. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/16/2012 |
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You took my breath away with this titillating twisty treat! oo la la;-)
You know I hate bugs,but leave it to you to give the spider a new look as spiderette;-) |
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| Reviewed by Debbie Lacy |
4/16/2012 |
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That's just what spiders do too! Creepy! Eek! Nice poem and thanks for sharing Jude! Blessings to you!
Debbie |
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| Reviewed by Ragno Donna |
4/16/2012 |
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I love this spiderette poem! I have a very inviting web....
Ragno
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/16/2012 |
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| so well done! |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
4/16/2012 |
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spiderette allure of silken weaves her web to taunt.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/16/2012 |
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| Ooooo... Pop! This kinda makes me fizz... remember that old poem/image "How Come I'm Not A Goth Girl"? LOL! :)) I love the way you have cute-sified the title, making her an "-ette"; a delicate little minx rather than a Big Bad Mama, perhaps?! This certainly gyrates across my strings right now, but it's probably just the webby threads of all my magazine features drivin me nuts... Makes me wanna go out and crack a few! Reminds me of Jerry's image and poem that I read yesterday, Sybaritic Theme, and it's interesting just how much we absorb as we read and write around this and other forums which then colours our interpretation and thus our comments. "she closes her furious legs" is also an interesting dynamic: "furious" as in playful/selfish denial or "furious" as in spinning around faster and faster to satisfy? The mind boggles... This is indeed an alluring and sticky treat. |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
4/16/2012 |
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| Sage, dear friend, knows how to say it better, than I ever could, bless ya, best of your spins yet. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
4/16/2012 |
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| Don't like spiders, of the human or bug kind...e |
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| Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti |
4/16/2012 |
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| Very nice imagery, jude. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/16/2012 |
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| Many spiderettes out there - both the human and the non-human kind. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
4/16/2012 |
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| Picture in my thoughts as I see this spiderette in all her glory, death and destruction awaits the unwary lover. Eh, a life's lesson, perhaps? |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
4/15/2012 |
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lubricious silk...poetic copulation...arachnid intercourse...
"celebrating the arrival
of a long-awaited catch"
s
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