|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|jude, a posit? - for the assumption is that we in fact, are - interesting for the fascination of the next, the final state - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Your wit is right-on Jude.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|An interesting query, Robert, with a fine 'tongue in cheek' spirit|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I was enjoying this until I read below that Matlack wants a job in the nude!|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|luv it, Jude! witty and sharp
anyone comin back, Jack?
(to tell us how it is on the other side)
|Reviewed by FRANK UNDERWRITTEN
|...just drop off the key, Lee... and get yourself free... no need to be coy, Roy... hop on the bus, Gus, don't need to discuss much... yeah... 50 ways to leave your Lover... Rhymin' Simon... this little ditty is fit Forese...|
|Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
|Kind of made me wonder if its just random names or people you know ... Since you started this, the first song that came to mind was, hit the road Jack and dont you come back, no more no more no more no more. That will be stuck in my head today ... ;) lol|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Feelings for one and all..
*jude* clever are the questions
|Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti
|A nice sing-songy pattern.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Very playful :-)|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|... in de nude, Jude; boy, Eddie M sure has you sussed, Babe! Munching on a melon, Helen; with a mate, Kate... and kinda late: Man, this really works! LOL!! And it's never too late to rise, Guys, and that ain't lies. And I'm hopin prior to Kingdom Come, rather than after... or at least as well as. Thanks, this is just what the doctor ordered for me today, Bugs. xx|
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|keep going jude...this is an intersting write...just didn't last long enough|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
This surely is quite a unique write. I find myself singing the song from our teens, 50 ways to leave your lover...but somehow I believe this is more about how one will be leaving this Earth for better places...Obsession with the unevitable is quite enlightening.
Just check out your back, Jack, make no plan, Stan, live for today, May, love for ever, Trevor, kiss my nose, Rose, take out the trash, Stash, wow, I guess you can go on and on and on with this...lol
Another mind bender from the Shaman....
Much peace, light, and love,
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Acoustics are good in hell...rhymes reverberate...ashes pave the way with a one-way ticket let those jealous poets stew while me an' you have a brew dark lager ale and peek at the titties on the Hooters widget!
Love & Bronx globes,
|Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
|Simple verses, but its power is in its very simplicity. There's a sense of poignancy...,.
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Kind of reminds me of the Paul Simon song, 50 Ways To Leave Your Lover. Interesting offering, Jude, it feels like a prologue to something more.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Gonna go away far, Bob,
Till I find me a job.
Gonna enjoy to travel, Jude,
Want a job in the nude,
Don't want to though, to you appear rude...
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|I was ready for ten more of those, kinda getting in tha groove, don'tja'no. I can tell you how Gil is going to feel, like he has finally found God and God spit in his eye.|