|Reviewed by kumar schamp
|quite ironical presentation of the present systems of govt.Image,diction ,simile and above all style is excellent.|
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|Awesome!! I say in bio it is up to us not to give in and to come together. WE are the PEOPLE. THEY babysit their bank accounts that we deposit into. No one will do for us, we must do for us, for our children and their children. It's time to fight back thru the children. Teach them the right side of right. It;s all very simple and right there for all to ee, it's L.O.V.E. - I loved this, you have great insight, keep it coming!|
|Reviewed by Johnny Duncan
|It sound like you may be a little right of left or left of right yourself. Too often life is nothing more than a "crust of bread and a corner to sleep in-a minute to smile and an hour to weep in-a pint of joy to a peck of trouble and never to mourn...."
Thank for you comments.
I thought that this excerpt might grab your attention. Stay in touch.
By the way, I am neither "elephin" nor "ass". I abandoned both parties when the local committees charged me qualification fees when I ran for office, then turned around and gave them to my opponents.
I then tried the Reform Party, but the disgruntled Republicans migrated over to it. So I ended up by being independent. Oh forget it. Just keep on writing. You are quite good at it.
|Reviewed by Cryssa C
|Very true! Love the word play in "little left of right"...so many ways that it is true!
|Reviewed by kg cummings
|what an accurate discription of the folly called government. great job with this one. Kathy|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|to quote George Wallace in the late sixties election of his opponents, "the difference my friend is, tweddle-dum and tweddle- dee" -- your poem eludes to the same facts and impressions of our government politicos -- print it and save it, it will probably always be valid -- thanks for sharing -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|kool write Dan
some times I think Right or left
politician are all the same
at least what they dish out is
"taxes & "B.S"
Peace be with you
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Sometimes I think aint none of em worth a damn. An astute look at politicians.|
|Reviewed by David Hightower
|Dan - You hit "the nail on the head" with this by pointing out that what we have is politicians when what we really need is leaders. - David|
|Reviewed by Gary Friedly
|Not only is the cleverly written but very true.
Gary A Friedly
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing this most valid perspective. Points well made, Dan. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|Yes, you're right or should I say a little left of right? lol. Well done. J'nia|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|And we pay for their games
How so very sadly true.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Right on the money, Dan!...and whose money?
Well, well said.
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Yikes, I have no better way of putting it than Sage and Rose, you are right on, but you know it's the same everywhere, except for Adolph of course he stuck it to us real good, so many masochists in this world, I know from whence I speak ha.
Blessings! Jasmin Horst
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|A struggle for political dominance using the people for a whipping post, and they're the same ones who write the books with outdated ridiculous anti-sodomy laws when we're all getting it in the ass anyway, but it's okay when they're sticking it to us, Hang just A Little Left of Right, the masochistic side of their political science...you tell it with a trunk of bray, Dan...right on.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|I like this Dan and this goes the same for Canada. We will continue to pay the price as they continue to play their games.
Newfie hugs, Rose