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Images in 15 Words
by D L Johnson

Monday, June 06, 2011
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Images in 15 Words
Dan Johnson
© June, 2011

A young woman sits alone
Inked tears trail from swollen eyes,
leaving a permanent stain.

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Reviewed by Janna Hill 9/15/2011
15 vibrant words said so much.
Janna
Reviewed by Jon Willey 7/27/2011
Dan, succinct yet powerful in imagery my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/27/2011
Succinctly powerful and most effective in images and meaning evoked, Dan. Well done! Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 6/7/2011
Well captured. Patrick
Reviewed by Chip Bergeron 6/7/2011
So much said in so few words!!!! Leaves the backstory to the imagination, as well as whats going to happen next.

Chip Bergeron
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 6/7/2011
Very touching words indeed sweet man...Hugsss
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 6/7/2011
Aw! Very moving words, Dan! It never ceases to amaze me how so few words can present a lengthly story.....

Anna
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 6/6/2011
Deeply moving and very expressive...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by John Flanagan 6/6/2011
Perfectly imaged, Dan,
brevity with real impact.

John
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 6/6/2011
Delivered with impressive impact Dan, and such a wonderful poem to relate to. Compact and powerful!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 6/6/2011
Says so much and captures the pain so perfectly Dan.
Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow 6/6/2011
Wow! I have an image painted so perfectly.. not easy to do with a blind woman.. excellent work! hugs to ya TD, SPP
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 6/6/2011
It does, doesn't it, Dan, a permanent stain. Nice work.



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