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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
6/14/2011 |
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| "Whatever happened to forever?" Dan, from nature's mystery and dance you have created a wonderful song of reason. There is the raw grip of finality, embraced with love and compassion. I truly enjoyed this marvelous rendering my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/11/2011 |
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I love this. There is much to garner from your verses; symbolic and meaningful. Also, this reminds me of a poem that I posted here quite some time ago. It is entitled, "Beauty" and you vividly brought back the meaning and the sentiments behind why I wrote it. Thank you, Dan. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
6/11/2011 |
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| The title is an instant draw and the poem, well, it's the perfect compliment to it. This is one of your best by far! Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
6/9/2011 |
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As usual a fantastic write Dan.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
6/9/2011 |
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| Wonderful writing ....I love this sweet Dan ... Hugss.... take care |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/9/2011 |
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| It's often the little things that have the most impact on us. Really liked this piece, my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
6/8/2011 |
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| Terrific observations. Yet this is the destiny of all things in the cosmos. |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
6/8/2011 |
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oh but that's not the end.... it now becomes food for a worm, who then excretes it to become fertilizer for the next crop of leaves and the cycle continues.... evermore.
Nice write Dan, Thanks Dick |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/8/2011 |
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Carries a solemnity as to how futile and fleeting life can be, well said...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/8/2011 |
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Dan,
This is a splendid poem.
It moves, it haunts, it challenges
and stays long long after in the heart.
This I save.
Kudos!
John |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
6/8/2011 |
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Very clever, Dan. Wonderful images, excellent writing and story.
Hugs to you,
CJ |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
6/8/2011 |
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And eventually, at some point, to be crushed in irreverent fingers. Great title - nicely conceptualized Dan.
Blessings ... richard |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
6/8/2011 |
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Wonderful expressions of the many layers of nature, Dan!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
6/8/2011 |
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I absolutely love this!! The images are just wonderful, TD... and yes I find myself grieving for that leaf... wanting it to return.
Excellent work! hugs, SPP |
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
6/8/2011 |
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How good is this? GREAT, that's how good.
Bravo Dan,
Marcia |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/8/2011 |
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| Well, I know I have tears in my eyes. |
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