|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|"Whatever happened to forever?" Dan, from nature's mystery and dance you have created a wonderful song of reason. There is the raw grip of finality, embraced with love and compassion. I truly enjoyed this marvelous rendering my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I love this. There is much to garner from your verses; symbolic and meaningful. Also, this reminds me of a poem that I posted here quite some time ago. It is entitled, "Beauty" and you vividly brought back the meaning and the sentiments behind why I wrote it. Thank you, Dan. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|The title is an instant draw and the poem, well, it's the perfect compliment to it. This is one of your best by far! Patrick|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|As usual a fantastic write Dan.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Wonderful writing ....I love this sweet Dan ... Hugss.... take care|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|It's often the little things that have the most impact on us. Really liked this piece, my friend.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Terrific observations. Yet this is the destiny of all things in the cosmos.|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|oh but that's not the end.... it now becomes food for a worm, who then excretes it to become fertilizer for the next crop of leaves and the cycle continues.... evermore.
Nice write Dan, Thanks Dick
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Carries a solemnity as to how futile and fleeting life can be, well said...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
This is a splendid poem.
It moves, it haunts, it challenges
and stays long long after in the heart.
This I save.
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|Very clever, Dan. Wonderful images, excellent writing and story.
Hugs to you,
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|And eventually, at some point, to be crushed in irreverent fingers. Great title - nicely conceptualized Dan.
Blessings ... richard
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Wonderful expressions of the many layers of nature, Dan!
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|I absolutely love this!! The images are just wonderful, TD... and yes I find myself grieving for that leaf... wanting it to return.
Excellent work! hugs, SPP
|Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford
|How good is this? GREAT, that's how good.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Well, I know I have tears in my eyes.|