|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|well done Dan most enjoyable reading
Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Nicely done, Dan. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Clever indeed. I was beginning to anticipate a fly swatter ending but super fly wins in the end! Patrick|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Dan, a delightful homogeneous fruity frappe of wordy wizardry my dear friend. You permitted my imagination to fly with you. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|This is excellent! But how do I get the image of flying fruit out of my head now...lol I truly enjoyed this.. fun and since dry humor is my favorite you had me from the first word...
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|This is excellent, punchy, innovative prose, Dan! I really think you're on to something here! A series if ever there was one. More please - really enjoyed! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Giggle....this is hilarious!Imagery is a blast!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Good Work, Guy! (Nice Story, Too!)|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Love it, Dan, love it!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Bravo,DL! A unique and very comical poem with very catchy names!
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|(insert applause here)very entertaining :)|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Raymond Chandler is turning over in his grave. Not one sexy secretary with big .. . . er . . . ideas. Not a sidekick who ie always in the way and a doofus. And last, but surely not least, no captain of the police to berate the fly detective. Shameful!
Actually I love it. You did the genre. . . er . . . I liked it, I surely did. Haha! Gotta love it.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|What a wonderfully quirky and hilarious write!
|Reviewed by Susan Bergeron
|PEACHY KEEN...GOOD JOB! SUE|
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|A real "Peach" of a write Dan.
thanks for the smile.
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|A real beaut, Dan. A fly on the wall made me smile.
|Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
|Dashiell Hammett would be proud of you!!!