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Three One-Line Haiku
by D L Johnson

Sunday, August 28, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I realized an error in the earlier posting which caused me to pull it and replaced it with the current offering.

I enjoy the challenge of writing One-Line Haiku in attempting to tell a story in few words.dlj

 Three one line haiku
Dan Johnson
© August, 2011

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Fingers dance on piano keys the way rain kisses rose petals

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Few words spoken we find heaven in the lost language of love

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Water ripples lily pad floats tom toad smiling gently ‘croaks’

 

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/19/2012
Different. I've never experienced haiku written this way. Nicely done, Dan. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford 8/31/2011
Hiaku takes great skill. One I've never mastered but you most definitely have Dan. I like the one-line format. Each one is a gem.
Reviewed by Jon Willey 8/29/2011
Dan, these are rewarding reads my dear friend. You have served up a moment of reading pleasure for me. Haiku and I have not found common grounds that permit me to effect the writing of any worthy of sharing. I am persistent though. So perhaps some day. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 8/29/2011
Beautifully done!

Anna
Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow 8/29/2011
I too like the first one best.. they're all good but that first one .. the image is stunning! Well done, TD!! Moi, SPP
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/29/2011
All quite captivating, my friend.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 8/28/2011
Fingers, piano keys & rose petals, thats the best of the bunch for me...e
Reviewed by John Flanagan 8/28/2011
i like these, Dan,
i like them very much.

John
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 8/28/2011
Liked the first one the best, buddy . . .



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