|Reviewed by c lea harris
|Yep, pretty much go hand-n-hand, one thing about an empty room, you can recreate it, give it life, add things to it, make it come back to life, your soul, mmm, sometimes, it takes awhile, and definetly that special someone, and then sometimes, no matter how hard they try, it takes a long time, or still never comes back to the high spirit it once was. So, well put together, coni lea|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Loneliness is like an empty room as your words have made it clear Dan. Great write.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Loneliness Is (Your) Pain Being Alone
Solitude Is Glory Of Being Alone...
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Beautifully expressed, Dan! We've all been in that empty room from time to time....
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|very deeply felt poem, DL,beyond sad!Very well done!|
|Reviewed by Tom Hyland
|DAN ... well done!
BOTH LACK COMPANIONSHIP, OR 'COMPANY' ...
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Dan, loneliness is the human spirit devoid of linkages to self respect -- when no star twinkles down from the daunting darkness of night and clouds chase away the sun -- when no voice of kindness is to be heard and prospects are pieces of shattered glass -- loneliness is a room filled with disappointment, misunderstanding and faith's candle snuffed out -- as you can see your work moved me to emote -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by David Hightower
|Nice one, Dan.|
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|Life as we know it unless one is fortunate to find. . . . . .whatever makes them happy. Reality Poetry.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Wonderful work..every room should be filled happiness~|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|This metaphor challenges me, Dan,
to think of all human condition where
love and companionship are absent
and we're faced with the reality, hard reality,
of broken and painful.
This is strong, moving writing.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Wise and compassionate writing of that inner landscape Dan!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Can we clean those dirty windows with a powerful cleaner...or must we lament in looking at a drab & dusty future...ed|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Dan, this writing was outstanding. As a loner myself I could not appreciate this poem more so.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
As Jerry said, You nailed it! You have great preception of how loneliness feels, I've been there, done that. Excellent writing, D.L.
Blessings to you,
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|Ahh my friend, sometimes a room filled can epitimize the truth depths of lonely as well as I have found out... but this piece.. oh my goodness.. this shows the beauty to be found in sadness and pain... remarkable work! Hugs, SPP|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|You nailed it. Loneliness is exactly as you have described it here. God, I hate those broken windows.|
|Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford
|Splendid Dan. Every line is right out splendid. There's no other word. I'm glad you found it again.|