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Ten for 10
by D L Johnson

Thursday, September 01, 2011
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Ten for 10
© 2008
Dan Johnson

10 days ago, you left me.
9 days ago, you returned
8 days ago, you slept with Maurice.
7 days ago, you cried,
6 days ago, you lied.
5 days ago, you were drunk, again.
4 days ago, you were hung over, again.
3 days ago, you were remorseful.
2 days ago, you flirted with Igor.
1 day ago, I left.
 

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Reviewed by Tom Hyland 9/6/2011
DAN ... WELL DONE, LAD !

FIND A 'BARREL' ... SHOOT SOME MORE 'FISH' ...
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 9/5/2011
Hungover remorse is like eating a pound of butter an hour before your cholesterol test. Keep on walkin' Patrick
Reviewed by Jon Willey 9/5/2011
the countdown to decision time and standing up for ones principles Dan -- steps to personal freedom self ordained -- I enjoyed this unique and very entertaining work -- I bid you joy and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 9/3/2011
Wonderfully terse and controlled writing Dan!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by David Hightower 9/3/2011
Dan - no wasted words. Like how the first line and the last line contrast. Sad and witty at the same time.

Igor? You wouldn't by chance be a Terry Pratchett fan would you? - David
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 9/3/2011
We are human and meant to take only so much. Great write dan.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow 9/2/2011
I agree with John totally... but Igor? That alone would frighten me...great job here.. love how you did this!

Moi...
SPP
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 9/2/2011
Giggle....this is a really kool way to tell a story, Dan! Loved it!

Anna
Reviewed by John Flanagan 9/2/2011
Dan,
i don't know whether to laugh or cry
or just be serious..it's how you deliver it
that hits home - direct, stark, matter of fact
and rather....sad

John
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 9/1/2011
Ten is his unlucky number.
Peace
Tony
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 9/1/2011
Sounds like a normal every day "family" relationship...e
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 9/1/2011
Hah! Igor, eh? Don't blame you for leaving. Have you noticed that oozing carbuncle in the middle of Igor's forehead.



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