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| Reviewed by Tom Hyland |
9/6/2011 |
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DAN ... WELL DONE, LAD !
FIND A 'BARREL' ... SHOOT SOME MORE 'FISH' ...
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
9/5/2011 |
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| Hungover remorse is like eating a pound of butter an hour before your cholesterol test. Keep on walkin' Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
9/5/2011 |
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| the countdown to decision time and standing up for ones principles Dan -- steps to personal freedom self ordained -- I enjoyed this unique and very entertaining work -- I bid you joy and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
9/3/2011 |
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Wonderfully terse and controlled writing Dan!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
9/3/2011 |
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Dan - no wasted words. Like how the first line and the last line contrast. Sad and witty at the same time.
Igor? You wouldn't by chance be a Terry Pratchett fan would you? - David |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
9/3/2011 |
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We are human and meant to take only so much. Great write dan.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
9/2/2011 |
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I agree with John totally... but Igor? That alone would frighten me...great job here.. love how you did this!
Moi...
SPP |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
9/2/2011 |
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Giggle....this is a really kool way to tell a story, Dan! Loved it!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
9/2/2011 |
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Dan,
i don't know whether to laugh or cry
or just be serious..it's how you deliver it
that hits home - direct, stark, matter of fact
and rather....sad
John |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
9/1/2011 |
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Ten is his unlucky number.
Peace
Tony |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
9/1/2011 |
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| Sounds like a normal every day "family" relationship...e |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
9/1/2011 |
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| Hah! Igor, eh? Don't blame you for leaving. Have you noticed that oozing carbuncle in the middle of Igor's forehead. |
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