|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|So beautifully expressed! We all come with boxes and baggage, guess it just cannot be helped. Yet, sometimes we do have to let go and let the sun shine back into our hearts....
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|heartfelt and profound write
peace & love be with you
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Perhaps someday that battle will be won and a new box of beauty will contain your soul. Such an intense and soul touching write RaeLynn.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Oh my!!! Oh my!!! what should be do if there were no demons to battle in the morning? and why don't set free those little pains like the Asians set free a canary, so it can take his spirits pains and scatter them in the sky?
Bittersweet one this is.
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|I used to have such a box - under lock and key, then decided that it was getting too heavy. Fortunately, your box has handles allowing friends to help you carry it. I am glad that you allow me to help 'carry your box.' It does get lighter, but that lining never goes away - bummer - as you say. Thankfully, the lining get thinner with time.
I love you. God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|That box can as Felix says Raelynn with a little help from your friends get a lot lighter. We love ya face and want all your days to be bright.
Your Newfie Friend sending Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Taking the peace and serienty where and how you can find it . . . This is a poem of need and inspection, supplimented by beauty which offsets the uglies within . . . I understand poetry such as this . . .|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Beautifully said RaeLynn. We all have a box of horrors tucked away somewhere, unfortunately. Some much bigger than others. Well done. God bless you my friend.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|The intensity of this write matches your inner most feelings and though that box may be heavy and hard to cope with...it is still a box of things unneeded and one that should be and can be thinned out to make the load just a little lighter. Then with the help of friends and smiles it will get easier to open and close it then before.
Open and honest Rae,
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
It never fully goes away, but with God's help, you'll get through. Powerfully penned sadness...well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.