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| Reviewed by Carol Surber |
1/11/2009 |
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A great way to express...captured by an angel!
Humor and purpose all in one |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
11/20/2008 |
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| Wonderful visuals in this poem. Great picture too. We all come to a crossroad at times . Much depends on which road we chose......M |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
10/29/2008 |
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| Oh how I did enjoy reading this one Walt, as always your friend ,Holly |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/6/2008 |
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| OOOO... I like this one, Walt. It's funny, isn't it... It's like a knowingness that rests just outside our peripheral vision, that we are not alone even when we feel rootless, focus-less and even disorientated. I like this sense of wandering... and I like the as-if overview of seeing folks walking through a maze, not understanding that they are on a collision course... until it happens. Even nicer if it is a supernatural meeting of sorts. Makes you want to walk that way again... if only you could remember the way. Fascinating, thank you. Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Tuchy (Carl) Palmieri |
4/1/2008 |
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Walt I love to hear of god being there for us and having angels to help us thanks for the reminders
sincerely
Tuchy |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
3/12/2008 |
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Good Morning Walt,
Yes Our Individual Crossroads All Do Bear Decisions, and those Right or Wrong Choices are a personal perspective. I firmly believe all is not really wrong as there are "things" that are important to the seemingly wrong choice. Yuo know like a lesson, another earned shot to wisdoms forte, All for greater purpose even without understanding.
I enjoyed your insightful poetic express of journeys road.
Embrasse'
Vickie
(Hummm? The Hokey Pokey wasn't what it was all about after all?)
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
2/20/2008 |
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I wrote of the "CrossRoads too, about 8 poems down" A bluesy number...
Awesome yearning poem, and that time WILL surely come!
Have you seen the movie "The Crossroads" What a strong intense movie or strength, life and acceptence and courage!
YOU should see it, Amazon.com it, and it's really worth it! Two men (in different decades) wanting the same and going the same dirt path, to....
Another treasure I will savor!
Love your heart Sweet Walt!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Peace, Warrior Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!
When do you cast off?/Boat/Journey/New Discoveries, Bring your camera!etc. Enjoy! all your upcoming BLESSINGS! and Lessons! Be it small or BIG!God Bless YOU!
STay SAFE!
STay Strong!
STay Positive! |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
2/15/2008 |
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Walt,
I am going to respond to this in a poem..You have touched my soul with this poem..
Much peace, love, and lightness to you, dear man,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
2/12/2008 |
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Rather like needing to be hit up the side of the head with a 2x4. LOL
Seriously, this poem reminds me of the many times in my life where I kept plodding along [because I thought that's what I was supposed to do] instead of taking time to smell the roses. Imagine what I would have seen, if I'd 'seen' it.
God bless you. Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill |
1/15/2008 |
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Soweeeeet! Loved it, thanks for pointing it out!!
Hope you didn't suffer any permanent marks, though :-)
Ribitribit
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
8/17/2007 |
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| Walt My Friend, decisons are so hard to make, all we can do is our best which I am sure you are doing. This too shall pass. Beautiful write. |
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| Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr. |
7/28/2007 |
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Sound wisdom my friend. Excellent flow and message.
Peace,
Bill |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/20/2007 |
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Enchanting, this is a beauty,that captivates the senses! Thanks for sharing Walt!
ET |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/20/2007 |
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Love this one: you took me there in gentle, engaging lines. Well done, Walt!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Jennave Coz |
6/19/2007 |
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| Perfect.No two days the same...Yet all! In God's Great Time....You are simply Marvelous! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
6/17/2007 |
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| Love the thoughts you have expressed here which go quite well with your bio page. Thanks for this sharing, and sharing is something I like to do too :-) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/11/2007 |
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| a very cute and sweet write-lucky guy! |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell (author) |
6/10/2007 |
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This made me smile, much enjoyed.
Janet xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
6/10/2007 |
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Enjoyed the humor in this one. Wonderful write, Walter!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
6/8/2007 |
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| This was an AWESOME Write! It held, honesty, humor, wit and a blessing! HUGS! SC |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/13/2007 |
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I can relate to this. I'm sure I would not be here anymore if it were not for my angel/s. Thanks for this, Walt. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/14/2007 |
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Terrific offering Walt!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
3/13/2007 |
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| well dayum, that write was fine |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
3/13/2007 |
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| Tantalizing tale that more than a few can relate too. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/13/2007 |
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Ah sometimes us menfolk are so blind we have to wait till we are hit in the head with a shovel before we get brave enough to make our moves. Sounds like you were lucky enought to have the lady move for you.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone |
3/13/2007 |
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| Never be afraid to look up and see the love in your angels eyes. Good story. Lady J |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
3/13/2007 |
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This is one of your best Walt. This has rhythm and soul and you bait the reader and hold them spellbound. This is terrific. You need to write more stories like this, even a saga might suit your fancy. In any case this is one fine piece.
Susan* |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
3/13/2007 |
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Walt, you are a phenomenal storyteller -- part fact, part fiction, even a wee bit of fantasy, this held me from the first word ... I enjoyed this immensely. Keep writing, I'll keep reading.
Love,
CJ |
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