|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Arrrrrrrrrr......I missed this one.......ditto.....arrrrrrr!!
"But every bordello still needs a slave,
Methinks I'll remain yore rogish knave!
Love sTinky Tinky
|Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
|Good thing you joined up with the winning side!!!
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|good one you old dog! had to laugh at the last line.. I suppose being at sea alone as long as you, you do?|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|i enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme of this write-fun and clever|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Are you sure you can sign an X Walt?
The fair ladies of the isle have ask me to join
the lot. I can wash dishes, but don't do, clean fish's
Me eyes can't stay off of boobs though, I wonder ifin
that would be a problem?
|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|OOOOOO Walt! You made an offer the lusty ladies of Labelle's crew can't resist. Nibbens LaRue will love floggin you! GRRRRR! Nibbens LaRue|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Yes, doooooooooooo come along for the ride, Sir Salt. I've jumped straight in with both feet... only to find I am probably waaaaaaaaaaaay out of my depth and need a lot more flesh on me skinny bones to be able to swing a cutlass acurately or bust out me bustier like them other Pandora Pirates... but I could practice me splicing skills in your Galley and exercise a bit of floggin on a rump steak or two to start with... Just until I get me L-plates off... Don't go offering your services to those other ruff boys when us girls could do with a Jack Sparrow around (ooops... perhaps I'm not sposed to say that...) Pertty Please?? Kutglass Kitty Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Lewis Findley (Reader)
|Captain Hook, Blackbeard, Johnny Depp, or Keith Richards, As Me Mammy used to say,, "Well you may look like Blackbeard, but that dont make you a member of Skull and Bones" Shiver me Timbers, Me Bucko.. Have a good one Buddy... "Donny"|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Arrr, indeed! Very entertaining poem; thanks for the smiles today! Very well done, Walt; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Just so you'll know, I also cook.
Are you sure you ain't an Ancient Ed??!! All Eds can cook very well, and sail. And most of us have been slaves at one point or another to some danged woman.
PS You really look like The Jersey Devil in that picture!
|Reviewed by stan nassano
|I'm a land luber meself,but I's do lies to get wet
maybe i can come along......i to swung a sword a time or two,and now from time to time it the needs does arise,can fight with the best of em.............good come back Walt
|Reviewed by twinklewrites at her desk (Reader)
|Great reading Walt enjoyed your adventures...hugs and Love, Peggy|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Would be no dilemma
if ye be thinking straight
So Salty Dog Walt
See Miss Kitty, me first mate
and make your X on the dotted line
you'd make a bordello slave so fine
we could use us a man
who can use his sword
and cook us a grand great dinner
so welcome ye Salty Dog, aboard
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Aye matie, I shared the salt sea with the storm clouds more than I care to remember but you make me want to start packing me sea bag again and grabbing me foul weather gear for just one more sail.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|This one is from Ed the Elder onboard the Enchantess, I thought that you were on your way to Madagascar to stay there and no go messing with my Red Head La Belle...or you heart Sir (if I can call a rogue that) will taste the point of my sword.
Georg (the Edvard)
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Splendid Walt you know which side your bread is buttered on.|
|Reviewed by Gerald Tate
|Excellent * * * * *
Gerald J Tate