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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
11/11/2009 |
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keep watching those stars with a wish in thy heart and all will be well...
nicely penned.
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
8/9/2009 |
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Well done!
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| Reviewed by High Country Girl |
4/18/2009 |
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How'd I miss this GEM, I hope she finds true love along that bumpy peppled road too.
xx Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed |
3/5/2009 |
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| Pricelss poem, a masterpiece |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
3/12/2008 |
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| Time does heal all and we just have to wait. Thanks for the beautiful writing to us all. You are a godsend to us too. |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
2/11/2008 |
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A poem filled with melancholy, yet hope...
Wonderful imagery took me there with her.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
2/11/2008 |
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| Love this - a glimpse into the heart. Very nice. |
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| Reviewed by Rafika Anderson |
12/25/2007 |
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| This appealing work reminds me of a dear friend of mine who recently recounted to me a tale of unrequited love. Beautifully crafted of strong imagery and emotion. Thank you for sharing. -=ra=- |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
10/12/2007 |
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I Feel Your Poetic Express With an Angelic Embrace of Hope
Very Lovely
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
10/7/2007 |
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This is an inspiring and soul's enriching piece. "Lonely Road" depicts the emotions and dreams in romantic symbolistic poetic beauty.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
10/1/2007 |
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| May all her wishes come true. So beautiful Walt. |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
10/1/2007 |
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What a beautiful write for any human being longing for their true love but as I look at the picture you have shared with us Walt I wonder too, do the animals of the forest feel these thoughts as well, a beautiful write, thankl you for sharing.
Newfoie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
9/30/2007 |
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| Marvelous poem. Keep these gems coming in, Walt. |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
9/30/2007 |
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She/he walks alone - seeking, longing and hoping. Survivors most often have the saddest road to walk - the memories keep popping up. She/he at least sees the hope in a brighter tomorrow as the wishing stars wink "everything will be alright." Undertones/overtones of one who has been abused or seen much abuse/tragedy, and still sees good around them.
There is so much to think about in this exceptional poem.
Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
9/30/2007 |
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Very touching, almost eerie observation even if the setting is imaginative, I can see it. And for people like her, I feel, and have been one of a kind. You are so good at short (but full) verse!
The pic looks like my driveway up here!
best, mike |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/30/2007 |
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Beautifuly written poem Walt! I love the premise!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
9/30/2007 |
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Love this Walt and who inspired it!
I feel the faith and light beaming HER through, taking
her on a much waited guided path, (You/etc) she will be
glad to enter through!
Your heart is TRUE and I feel it through the lines/life
you aim to pursue!
Wonderful heartfelt poem!
Peace! Love and Bright Light!Warrior Purple Goddess Sheeeoox
STay Positive! Happy and STrong! I'm with you in warm deep spirit, sa you trek this path NEVER alone! |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
9/30/2007 |
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A beautiful poem my friend, a bit mystical with a touch of romance...enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell (author) |
9/30/2007 |
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Lovely & Ghostly poem, just my cup of tea. Excellent writing Walt. Take care my friend.
Janet xoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
9/30/2007 |
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Excellent write Walt
most enjoyable reading
Peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/30/2007 |
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| I think many walk a road such as this. I know I once did myself, but we gotta keep on walkin, til we finally get where we wanna be. |
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| Reviewed by larry linville |
9/30/2007 |
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The emotion of this poem comes through loud and clear. I love, "She wears the coat of a survivor, she does." and the stars saying "Everything will be all right."
Very strong!
Larry
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
9/30/2007 |
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| Excellent poem Walt.. enjoyed the read, love holly |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/30/2007 |
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So much yearning within this offering!!
But even in the dark of night the pebbles of this dirt road shines bright...saying not to give up hope!!
Heartfelt offering!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
9/30/2007 |
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A graveled life road should not be travel barefoot just wearing a survivor's coat.
That's what the words are whispering to me.
Great.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
9/29/2007 |
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Beautiful poetry Walt. It is said by a wiseman...
"Life is a graveled road". I can certainly attest to this.
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/29/2007 |
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Walt,
This one is poignant, yet tenderly expressed hope: well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
9/29/2007 |
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| very sad-a very lonley write-well penned |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
9/29/2007 |
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| So gentle, loving and beautiful! She will walk alone till her one and only joins her, then they will happily walk hand in hand! LOVE YOU! Sissy |
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| Reviewed by Charlie |
9/29/2007 |
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| Ordinary words in beautiful texture. I love it. |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
9/29/2007 |
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| Interesting. It's a moody piece. Kinda sad as she's alone. Hope she finds what she seeks. Cheers |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/29/2007 |
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Gosh,, I felt the weight, sadness, and hope all in one, very moving !
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly |
9/29/2007 |
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| Awesome and so much imagination. This lonely road's filled with so much hope. Especially like the never-ending ending..."wishing stars continue to wink." Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
9/29/2007 |
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Awwww! This is such a beautiful and heartfelt piece. It is filled with such strong inner emotions, enjoyed the write....
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/29/2007 |
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Strong write and one that leaves a lot for the reader's interpretation...especailly the padded feet...almost a wolfine thought there...great stuff.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/29/2007 |
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| I wish, I wish, I . . . Wonderful poetry here, Walt . . . Sad kinda, but with an uplifting feeling about it too . . . Wishing stars heal and make dreams come true . . . Gotta love it . . . |
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| Reviewed by Ann Scarborough |
9/29/2007 |
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Poignant write Walt. Beautifully done.
Love,
annie |
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