|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|i'm luv'n traveling thru your writes...so glad i stumbled onto your work...'of the sea' stuck its big foot out and here i am...i'm mesmerized...i bow to your talent.
can't wait to get back and re-read 'being swept out to sea'. we had a similar experience...still too traumatized to write about...only notes...we were foolishly (as novices) going in at night (inter coastal)...off coarse in st. andrews sound...ran a ground swept into the breakers...tow ran aground coming for us...battered bruised for 7 nightmarish continuous slamming black hours. needless to say we're taking sailing safety lessons etc...was a great learning experience of what NOT to do and what TO do and have aboard...will have to say i was glad to get home to my horses... we're marinaed in brunswick ga at hidden harbor marina....so glad to bump into your work...we're also vietnamers...pmedlin
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|So peaceful and relaxing to go without having to think about anything at all.
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|This poem nudges me into 'nothing really'..yet it opens everything..really!!!!
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Beautiful imagery you have painted here, Walt. Very calming, and peaceful words.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
There's so little peace of mind in the world anymore...if we can have it for an instant its not forgotten. I love this poem of contentment and peace.
|Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
|She sits wonderfully in the moment!!!
A lovely, engaging piece bursting with freedom and peace of mind!
Love and Joy, Suzie :-D
|Reviewed by Deborah Plante (Reader)
|This is one of my favorites Walt...Beautiful|
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|A meditative poem, very visual.
Stay well and keep writing
|Reviewed by B Wise (Reader)
|Lovely poem, it has such a smooth sweetness about it.|
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|A very beautiful poem.I enjoy reading it,take care
|Reviewed by steve Chering
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Oh, how love those moments of which you speak - thinking of nothing, really! Wish I'd take more of the moments for myself. Maybe I will, really.
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner
|Very peaceful write. Lovely pic as well.|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Absolutly breathtaking silence!
I feel the moment you created!
A favorite of mine! A gem I will treasure!
Warm hugs and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Scuse me, that looks suspiciously like my fav place up on me mountain in NZ, ahem you been on holidays??
LOL...I wouldnt mind sittn right there once again.
I could of sworn there for a minute you were describing MOI
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Thanks for sharing Walt...|
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|Great! Nice photo! There was a place much like this one 20 minutes from my house in Ga. I'd swim there once in a while in the summer. Cheers|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is beautifully done Walt! It has a magical rhythm to it that lulls one into being there...
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Tranquillity at it's best.....yip peace of mind within the arms of nature....stunning write!!
The imagery is so real I have to shake my head to make sure i am not "THERE" right next to this stream!!
One of your most delicate and most defined pieces!!
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Walt, this is absolutely breath taking!
Loved your words and the imagery..
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I liked this the first time I read it, and I still do!|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Water licking between the fingers like a thankful puppy dog for your scratching him back his ear...
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Soooothing, i gotta nip out to the forest after reading this...|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|love the feel of peace in this write-such a luxury to just exist and not have to have any agenda|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Soothing photograph as is this write. Wonderful....
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|This is a lovely haven for a woman who loves nature and is creative. She doesn't need to do a thing but take it all in.
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Walt you did'nt need the picture, not that it's not very beautiful, but so is your poem and is says it so well, Jasmin Horst|
|Reviewed by larry linville
|Walt, super job. The simplicity and the emotional helped me relax from the business of my morning. For a few moments I was thinking of nothing really.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Have had that same feeling while sitting next to a babbling brook.|
|Reviewed by Dee C.
|Thinking, Wondering, Dreaming, Wishing and Hoping of many things...really! Lovely write!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|,,Just a moment in time,,,,nothing more, Nice one Walt.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Lovely poem, Walt; very nice! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Well this write is certainly not nothing...nothing short of great. Loved it and the wandering chain of her thoughts.
|Reviewed by Leo Durrant
|You sure know how to set a mood. I love moments like that when you don't have to think/dream/wonder/wish/hope for anything. You just ARE. And that's enough to bring the peace.
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|Love this one. Your poem gives me an image of a beautiful young maiden sitting by the stream--and I added to the image--barefooted, long flowing hair, a diaphous skirt blowing in the breeze--her delicate hand sifting water from a clear blue stream.|
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|Nice vivid images and this reader wanting to see the beauty of nature that fills her mind, but you've painted a beautiful picture for the reader to see. I enjoyed this.|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Wow! and Excellent all wrapped into one great poem.
|Reviewed by Ted Bossis
|Cerebral & placid ~Ted|
|Reviewed by Jennifer Butler
|I enjoyed reading this so much. It's a beautiful poem.|
|Reviewed by Charlie
|This poem is about nothing really, but I love it just the same. --Charlie|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
This is beautifully penned serenity. Well done.
((HUGS))) and love, Karla.