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| Reviewed by Leslie Bond |
8/27/2009 |
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| This is really a fun filled write. Leslie |
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| Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) |
7/31/2009 |
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| And it's about time you had some fun! Good for you, love Holly |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
7/27/2009 |
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| laze in the sun the day long my friend -- no keyboard distractions of tip tip tip, tip tip -- sail surf and sip a cool drink - peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
7/23/2009 |
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An enjoyable and amusing poem,I enjoy it,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/21/2009 |
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| Delightful write and piccy, Walt; love it! Well done! :) |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
7/21/2009 |
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| Sounds like it and glad to hear it! Bubbling alliteration and assonance here to match the feel-good! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/21/2009 |
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It truly is amazing how sun, sand and surf combine with beach balls and summer to give us such warm happy feelings...shoot time for me to head to the beach...see ya.
fee |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/21/2009 |
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This sounds like pure fun to me...
I walk my beach with you
Pick up some shell
Looking for some answer
My feet in your feet
My eyes is your eyes
And all I need is my Ocean
My Shell, my Soulmate
My eyes in your eyes
With love abuse instead
That's all I need
Love Tinka
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
7/21/2009 |
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| Good for you!! Enjoyed this lighthearted nautical write. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
7/21/2009 |
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Salty Walt, I don't see it, where's the cooler with the Coors?
Pee Wee |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
7/21/2009 |
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Walt, I don't see it, where's the cooler with the Coors?
Georg
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
7/20/2009 |
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| It sounds like a wonderful time. Enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
7/20/2009 |
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Awwwww, as long as you are having fun...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
7/20/2009 |
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| Good for you!! |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
7/20/2009 |
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Well I surely miss you Walt, but if you are having a good time, then I say go for it!! Love your poem sounds so light and happy. I am glad you are hanging with your zen.. lol
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/20/2009 |
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SOUNDS WONDERFUL!! GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING THIS POEM FULL OF THE PHRASES AND IMAGERY THAT WAS SO ENJOYED.
JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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