|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|So sad....but so very true for a lot of young women. WEll done, Walt.
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|I hope that day is not too late for her, to enjoy A real Life, WHEN HER CHOICES are made! You wrote this great Walt!
Blessings of PEACE and HARMONY, SOULFUL_PurplePaSsionsSHEEoxxo
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|She allows others to control her life.
She swears some day this cycle will end,
But not holding her breath,
Till that day comes.
Here's to HOPE--
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|I hope that day comes soon. An emotive pen Walt.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|A moving write Walt!!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A sad write Walt
But sadly truth for many
of beautiful young woman.....
Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|This really kicks in, and hits home...Well done Walt..xx|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A very sad tale, my friend.|
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|I've seen this more times then I wish I had and it is always such a shame. The lucky ones make it past this and have really good lives. To many are lost to it and never do they survive. A sad write my friend and I hope it's not to personal a friend you write about. LadyJ|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|so many do torture themselves with their pasts--this is well written,|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Your words here have the depth and passion of someone who really cares. You came through Walt and you're writing is deeper than ever before.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Sadness in these lines ... effectively penned, Walt.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|A pretty box can be in disguise containing all Pandora's secrets.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|This one hits home for I have met a few girls like this (my daughter worked as a coat check girl at a strip club) and you have captured their world so well.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Powerful write, Walt; well done! Love the piccy!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn.
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Reality. This girl could have been me. Instead, I subscribed to the wolves, dancing in the medicine circle. Nature is the only thing that will heal a woman's soul...men and women alike respect nature as a healer and teacher..Her Torture is awakening poetry, Walt...Blessed Be.
|Reviewed by Deborah Plante (Reader)
|So many I know...important words...Blessings|