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Did I
by Poetic Vision
Thursday, May 24, 2007
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Did I mess it up
Did I do it wrong
Did I take the melody out of your song? 

Did I make you cry
Did I forget to say goodbye
Did I make you want to fall out and die? 

Did I make it real
Did I make you feel
That maybe this time it was the real deal? 

Did I mess it up
Did I do it wrong
Did I take the melody out of your song? 

Did I make it real
Did I make you feel
That maybe this time it was the real deal? 

Did I?
 



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Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 5/27/2007
tricky
tricky
tricky
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 5/25/2007
Wonderful writing,Hugsssssss
Reviewed by Gloria Gay 5/25/2007
Wonderful. Amazing how a few words can carry such punch.
Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett 5/24/2007
We are only human right?
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