|Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
|Wow, this is very deep! I believe you must have won that contest. Very realistic and earthy expression in this writing, thank you.|
|Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
|Though this is a fictional story-telling poem, there's a very intimate rage in it. I also like the illustration very much. It's very strong.|
|Reviewed by Mariann Klimczuk
|Sandy, your ability to ceeate is fantastic.
|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
Thanks so much for all your wonderful comments!!! I greatly appreciate your all for your continued interest and support of my work.
A big THANK YOU to you all!!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by * Starman * *
|Ooh, I like it! You left it up to the reader's imagination as to the spot mentioned in the last line. I imagined a spot under a tombstone.
I felt a resurgence of passion from your writing within this poem. The ghost of Sandy past meets up and compares notes with the ghost of Sandy future. A newer, and better author emerges from the renaissance of this confident, hopeful and ready to face the world writer. This wave of energy carried me effortlessly right along with you till the end. Well done.
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Sandy this is beautifully crafted and it
Inspires the imagination
It’s very sad when one selects cold and not warmth
Brilliant and to have started with just sixteen words
And come up with such a beauty wow!!
I love the Picture Too
Sending you Peace Love and Light…Yolie
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|WONDERFULLY done Sandie, I am IMPRESSED! and STUNNED!
Got me thinking, what a cruel cruel world!
but we must keep it POSITIVE!
This is a sad place indeed/this place (and that person taking it) that you easily write of!
Love the drawing too! Very detailed and real!
Warmest Blessings, LOVE, and Bright Light, Warrior PURPLE LADY SHEExoooo
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|This is all too true, the me generation has only Pity on themselves, no respect for the elderly even their own, and most times no love either, for they feel so selfishly wronged in so many ways, but as you say the pasture is waiting for them all. It"s a good metaphor of how we take care as a society in general, or not want to take care of our elderly, as they are considered a burden, not a treasure.
My wife worked in an old age home, she knows all about it.
Bless you! Jasmin Horst
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Wow, this is great Sandie, I think that the posters below have said it for me. :)
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
This seemed like a great challenge for you quite an interesting story/poem indeed. Your illustration seems befitting as does the title I also enjoyed reading this too Sandie.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|So much sadness in this Sandie, but you've written it so well.|
|Reviewed by Linda Law
|Wow... the depth within this poem is masterful! I felt the words and could feel the emotion that it brought. This was a story within a poem.. Excellent. hugs, lindalaw|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|you handled the challenge with a wonderful poem Sandie May -- quite an emotional write -- peace and love to you -- Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara
|Oh I do love challenges such as this! You know usually a piece posted for a challenge ends up being some riveting and excellant writing! This is indeed a thought provoking story poem piece! Good Work Sandie!
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Excellent poem Sandie,you did a great job on it :-),take care
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|What a wonderful poetry exercise!
I really love the drawing you have sketched!
This poem has wonderful expresion of emotions Sandie
and the subliminal message of it's meanings is clear too
Much Love & Inspirations
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Great thought went into the poem. Its filled with a lot of saddness.....M|
|Reviewed by Robert Jude(Ace) Forese
|the lack of authenticity permeates this poem ... well done, Sandie ...|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Sad when one does not bring warmth..but instead chooses coldness...well done Sandie!
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
This has an atmosphere of chill and sadness and is laced with strong feeling, and best of all it works on several levels.
|Reviewed by David Young
|This poem has so many hidden meaning, it keeps you rereading it in different ways, that I love about it.|
|Reviewed by Ken Becula
|This is powerful, Sandie. It really strikes a blow, and is like a curse to the faithless man.|
|Reviewed by Shedding Light
|I love it Sandie!!!
Harold M. Nash
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|Sandie you did well, Loved the irony.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Very well done and I am sure a great competitive write for that challenge.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|The whole offering is very creative and inspires the imagination. Thank you, Sandie. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Well written and very powerful. Great sketch too!
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|So sad and illuminating write Sandie, well done...love, Bonnie|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Very sad sweet lady nice to read you again I have missed you..stay safe and well..Hugs|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Sad write, Sandie; and the picture says volumes! Well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Heartbreakingly illustrated and penned, Sandie, I feel her pain. Well done.
((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Powerfully sad, Sandie.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|A poem like opening a forbidden door of a room that we shouldn't enter but that sadly, many do.
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Powerful write Sandie, you have a gift to write a variety of Genres, keep these coming and be blessed
In Christs Love
|Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
|Powerful piece and visuals!
Biggest love and peace to you lovely Sandie!
I hope everything worked out well!
Love, Suzie :-D
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Intriguing journey with a known address! We call it South Heaven! Very visual and chilly felt, Sandie...be well...