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Looking For God
by Jane M. Wallace
Tuesday, March 20, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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For those who say, there is no God
I'll ask them to take a walk with me.
First we'll step upon a sandy beach,
as the sun lights up a sparkling sea.
Then a trip up a mightly mountain,
to walk amongst the tall pines and oaks.
We'll stop and rest beside a waterfall
and see what serene thoughts, this provokes.
Next I'd show them a flower garden,
where butterflies delight in their dance.
I wonder if they could still believe,
such beauty could happen, just by chance.
If still the Lord's presence can't be felt,
I have one last thing for them to do.
Lift their eyes to the full moon's splendor.
His face is shining down upon you.
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| Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr. |
5/20/2007 |
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Amen!.....A glorious tribute to God's grace and magnificence Jane!
Peace,
Bill |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/20/2007 |
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Jane,
The fool says in his heart, 'There is no God.' All we have to do is look around us: His evidence is everywhere. BEAUTIFUL inspiring write today, you've blessed me with your verse! Thank you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
3/20/2007 |
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| A great moving poem Janie.. Keep um coming .....Love ,,M |
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| Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett |
3/20/2007 |
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| What else can i say but that your writing is just fabulous as you spill out what you feel and want to say. It was a pleasure to read fine work as yours and thanks for sharing this with us all here on the den. |
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