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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/22/2007 |
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I do like the way you expressed your thoughts about the concept of "love" via your verses here, Jane. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
3/21/2007 |
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| Love can be risk, or for some it comes like a gentle breeze finding its way into ones heart forever more . It can transport two souls to a life of togetherness, sharing and communion of mind and spirit.......M |
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| Reviewed by Daring Sunshine |
3/21/2007 |
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You must first love God with all your heart, soul, mind. Than learn to love and forgive yourself of your shortcomings (life is hard but God is good-trust Him), seek to be kind to others as you'd want them to be to you. And remember, you're no better than anyone else. God made us all in His image!
Peace&Grace,
sharon |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/21/2007 |
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Jane,
Love is indeed a risk, but it's worth it if you find the right someone. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by NIDA FATIMA |
3/21/2007 |
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gr8 work
i think this piece of poetry has quite realsitic approach towards love. |
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