|Reviewed by Barbara Henry
|Great poem Stan-you have described a typical day in October in a very beautiful,creative way.
I especially like these lines: A car alarm is sounding
all, the trees shudder
All life has a bounce today.
Barbara J. Henry
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|All life has a
bounce today - Stan, my friend, you have certainly found your voice in pen. I am so happy for you!! You just get better and better.
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|I'm glad I waited until today to read this.. It is a very gloomy day in October here and this really lifted my spirits...)
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Enjoyed this my friend, it is sunny here in the southeastern mountains of Kentucky as well, beautiful blue sky! Your write is warm and heartfelt, it's always a pleasure to stop by your den.
|Reviewed by blue soplain
|i love the simplistic languidness of this; the observational of the reality with the surreality. .. . the machine with the world contrast. .. i jsut cant tell if all the world is recoiling from that alarm or in synch?
i love the way you feel with your eyes and see with your heart~
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|The kind of day I love, in one of my favorite months. I enjoyed this lovely poem Stan!
|Reviewed by A PAX
|A soft slice of life here, very visual and earthy....:)|
|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|A purrrrrfect day, to think bout someone you love and I am! LOVE YOU! SC|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Here in Brandon the same scenario takes place. When I come home I can hear the children heading for a late afternoon swim. Don't ya just love it!!!
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|I just returned from five sunny October days in West Virginia and it was very sunny...90 to 95 degrees, four of the five days...but it was nice...Good work on the write.
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|But what a welcome respite from August!!