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· OLYMPUS — Of Gods and Men [Aquarius Trilogy Book 3]

· Pluto Effect [Aquarius Trilogy Book Two]

· Alec [Alexander Trilogy Book One]

· Peter and Paul

· DELUSIONS — Pragmatic Realism

· WALL — Love, Sex and Immortality

· Gift of Gamman

· Essays on Human Potential, Volume I

· Winston's Kingdom [Winston Trilogy Book III] eBook

· ELOHIM-Masters & Minions [Winston Trilogy Book Two] ebook

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· Stuffed Panda

· Our Park

· Two of a Kind

· What if?

· Hello?

· The Mirror

· Nine Months

· Thirsty Work

· Around the World

· Flash

· WALL - Love, Sex and Immortality.

· It Started with Peter and Paul...

· Flesh and Bones?

· Republicans

· Question

· I read some novels…

· Avatar (the movie)

· A Point of Interest...

· A Little White Pill

· Pets

· Violin Concerto

· Wilderness

· So What?

· Arctic Idol

· Beloved

· I am still a Fat Cat

· I am a Fat Cat

· My Cat is Fat

· The Search

· Musica Universalis

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  Fundamental Flaw
by Stan I.S Law (aka Stanislaw Kapuscinski)
Saturday, March 08, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.

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For all of you who enjoyed
Instructions to Adam and Eve.

When first I filled the glory of My heaven
With say… a billion, perhaps a trillion stars,
I never thought, to My great disdain,
You’d fill your streets with just as many cars.

Just to enchant you; you my favourite children,
I gave you love’n beauty, above and below,
only to find, to my further chagrin
that even I can make a fundamental flaw.

I thought I’d made you, truly in My likeness.
Hoping love’n beauty will give you a great thrill.
Alas even I, Almighty as I AM,
have erred, well… divinely, by giving you free will.

Stan Law

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Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
rhyme and rhythm pure joy, a delight. I'll be tracking your work as you have something to say and you say it well. Insightful and melodic.
Best Regards J'nia Fowler
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Wise ontological spiritual meditation.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
To go our own way with free will was the result of
Adam and Eve's sin. Just so we choose the right now, but many go astray and many come back. By God's leading I hope free will takes all in the right place at the right time and all end of with God in his kingdom.
Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Well said Stan~`*
Reviewed by Gerald Tate
Hello Stan

I'm sure you took the words right from out of Gods mouth with this one.

Excellent piece of poetry.

All the best--Gerry
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis
Very interesting write and great style!
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