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  Fundamental Flaw
by Stan I.S Law (aka Stanislaw Kapuscinski)
Saturday, March 08, 2008
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For all of you who enjoyed
Instructions to Adam and Eve.

When first I filled the glory of My heaven
With say… a billion, perhaps a trillion stars,
I never thought, to My great disdain,
You’d fill your streets with just as many cars.

Just to enchant you; you my favourite children,
I gave you love’n beauty, above and below,
only to find, to my further chagrin
that even I can make a fundamental flaw.

I thought I’d made you, truly in My likeness.
Hoping love’n beauty will give you a great thrill.
Alas even I, Almighty as I AM,
have erred, well… divinely, by giving you free will.

Stan Law

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Reviewed by J'nia Fowler 11/21/2008
rhyme and rhythm pure joy, a delight. I'll be tracking your work as you have something to say and you say it well. Insightful and melodic.
Best Regards J'nia Fowler
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 8/25/2008

Wise ontological spiritual meditation.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 5/25/2008
To go our own way with free will was the result of
Adam and Eve's sin. Just so we choose the right now, but many go astray and many come back. By God's leading I hope free will takes all in the right place at the right time and all end of with God in his kingdom.
Reviewed by Theresa Koch 5/23/2008
Well said Stan~`*
Reviewed by Gerald Tate 4/7/2008
Hello Stan

I'm sure you took the words right from out of Gods mouth with this one.

Excellent piece of poetry.

All the best--Gerry
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis 3/8/2008
Very interesting write and great style!

Books by
Stan I.S Law (aka Stanislaw Kapuscinski)

One Just Man [2nd. Ed.], Prequel to Elohim—Masters & Minions

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Alexander [Alexander Trilogy Book II]

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The Avatar Syndrome (Prequel to Headless World)

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Pluto Effect [Aquarius Trilogy Book Two]

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Headless World––The Vatican Incident (Sequel to The Avatar Syndrome)

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ELOHIM—Masters & Minions. A spiritual thriller, sequel to One Just Man

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Alec [Alexander Trilogy Book One]

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