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After my sculpture in steotite.
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When I shall go away, surely––I will remain.
Moving, yet keeping still, on my eternal way.
I shall traverse, lonesome, eons of space and time,
Though they don’t really exist, in the heavenly clime.
When I shall go away, I’ll keep you by my side,
Watching over your own, foolish illusion of life.
Imprisoned in a folly, a sheath of flesh and blood.
Searching for me, within you––my love at a divine flood.
When you grow old and wise you’ll learn that you and I,
Though divided by strange, absurd perception of time,
we were never apart. That since the world begun,
Your and my divine essence were always, truly One.
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Stan I.S. Law
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/22/2008 |
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This is a fine offering, Stan. Thank you for sharing your gifts. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
12/2/2008 |
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| Beautiful writing sweet man..enjoyed very much..stay safe and well..Hugsss...be well and always safe |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
11/27/2008 |
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| It does feel this way at times when we meet people-your sculpture shows that, too, good work. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
11/27/2008 |
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I have enjoyed the reading of "When I go away…"
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
11/26/2008 |
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I enjoyed this piece also, especially its' form, and the concept of illusion, time as a perception. What is this thing called the time space continuum anyway? Are we all really here? And where do we go, exactly? Thank you for this piece.
Regards J'nia |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
11/25/2008 |
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| Compelling poetry as is the art. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/25/2008 |
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A beautifully written poem of the never ending motion
we are part of on our evrlasting journey!Especially
when two souls are interwoven,in forever love!
Eilwwn |
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
11/25/2008 |
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| Wonderful Stan. It flows as beautifully as your sculpture. Both are true works of art. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
11/25/2008 |
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Fluid, flowing beauty in realization that life never really ceases, only move to a higher plateau...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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