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Veiled Moon by Dale Clark Monday, January 11, 2010 Rated "PG" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
Veiled Moon fog veiled moonlit night silent except a thrum ears vibrating toneless eyes blinking starless the darkness held no word the darkness held no voice the soul becomes distressed cold mist begins to fall the moon removes it’s veil a face appears there the fog begins to crawl stars wink in a blur young lovers were torn young lovers were tattered covering each other in fear hearts rapidly beating as one the crisp cold flew near the moon begins to shake the moon begins to shiver a winters night was born the fog now veiled stars star stricken lovers whose ears heard whose eyes peered youths eyes couldn’t see youths eyes couldn’t be embraced by the fog entranced by the fog the heart was veiled the heart was vanquished a thrum was heard moonlight shone stars winked alone the night was done the truth just one word alone... lovers awaited the dawn broken hearts fell upon the rising sun sun rays pierce the sky lovers part © D.E. Clark

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Reviewed by Mr. Ed	1/12/2010

Quite a sad but captivating piece, Dale.




Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan	1/11/2010

interesting write-visual and with depth of feeling




Reviewed by L. Figgins	1/11/2010

Joggles the memory, bringing the memory of young lovers to life. Achingly long and painful in the ending juxtaposition. The language is sparse and powerfully emotive. As per your usual genius, the imagery is stunning. A beauty, Dale...Lin




Reviewed by Kate Burnside	1/11/2010

Oh dear! What a night!! Sounds like confusion reigns... bit like a scene from a Shakespearian play. The tensions and countertensions are palpable, Dale. I like the confidence you display in this writing. It stands strong and is very nicely controlled, conveying drama without being overly-dramatic, yet very effective. Hope this new decade finds you well and on the up! xx




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	1/11/2010

A most compelling offering, Dale. Parts of this bring chills to my spine. Love and peace to you, Regis




Reviewed by Liana Margiva	1/11/2010

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva




Reviewed by Regina Pounds	1/11/2010

Eloquent, yet laconic...this poem shreds the heart to pieces. Such a night! Doom and gloom and chill. Effective writing. Gina




Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart	1/11/2010

Unique and stunningly penned Dale.