|Reviewed by jude forese
|this poem brought me to all the right places...|
|Reviewed by Brittany Renée
|A poetic fantasy tale!
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Jessica...I can see your ending of hope in this poem after all the foreplay is about
hurting. It ends on a positive note. But I can see this as a cycle that you will ride over and over and over without a solution to what is causing this and a correction or change of directions. You seem to be selling yourself short this way, or your poem's premise is false. But a great write that brought out discussion and the good ones always do this. Happy Holidays. Bill Murray
|Reviewed by Bourge
|very visual and emotional, I really liked this!