|Reviewed by Tony Jenkins
|What a great find !
I hope you want for nothing !
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Good Morning Linda,
What A Lovely Treasure Your Have From Your Days Of Being A Little Girl!
This Write Is So Precious. Your Beautiful Words From So Long Ago Are Penned Like A Princess!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Very nicely done Linda, blessings, holly|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I want to live nestled in the woods and befriend all the deer.
I still do! And I wouldn't worry about that very nasty critic below.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
I thought it was a believable poem for a ten year old. I'm not a critic and never will be but if I were a teacher in an English Literature Class you would definitely not get an F. Blessings Always, Paul.
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|You have shown all the aspirations of what dreams are made of. Simply a beautiful poem.|
|Reviewed by Linda Bergman-Althouse
|Thanks for your opinion David. Obviously you didn't know me at 10 or the environment I was raised in. Only then would you understand why I very clearly knew the concept of wanting and dreaming. You are right with most of your other accusations--probably written quickly (maybe when I was hiding in the chicken coup), no idea about construction, it is repetitive and some of the other things you said. Although at 10, I wasn't very demanding -- too intimidated for that. So if you were my teacher and I was 10 would I get an F in poetry?