Erotica, Joy Or Shame?
by Southern Comfort
Monday, August 04, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Naughty, nasty, enticing, making genitalia ache,
Poetry of actions and deeds, arouses, causing passion quakes.
Erotica, passion fruit, ripe for the picking.
Causes nectar juices to flow, finger licking.
Musky, mingling aroma, a perfect blend,
Erotica, a treat for the senses, a feast without end.
Words like fondling, groping and caressing, done by woman and man,
When explicitly expressed, brings haughty disapproval, so hard to understand.
Actions that are done by all, should be met with favor,
Expressed, adored, as a delight to be savored.
Sucking, licking, nuzzling are words used everyday,
They become nasty, when describing foreplay.
Beautiful, joyful expressed feelings are not nasty or bad,
When we feel the need to hide our sexuality, this is truly sad.
Music: China Blue
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|Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre
|Joy! Too many hang-ups people harbor deep within... is usually from their own imposed childhood shame & usually stems from religion... and poetry... like in the Bible... they think human is a non-animal... but hey... put simply... we're just mammals! That's my opinion and I'm sticking to it.
Very thought-provoking piece! Well penned!
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|...an then...that monster with the two backs and the high moans of those condemned to be consumed by the pleasure climax of an invisible fire until their ashes are taken by the wind of exhaustion...
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
I guess when you really think about it we all have a touch of eroticism in us. Some readily show it and some keep it hidden real well. (lol) Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|This is strong and earthy, SC, and open and honest, and the final line an excellent ending.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Expressions are just that expressions shared by one to others. Seems to me we have no problem expressing anger, hatred, war, bloodshed and the like, but when it comes to passions of desire some come out in protest. Perhaps it should be the other way around, you think?
Be always safe
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|I see nothing wrong with expressing ourselves or our wants and needs, when we feel the need to hide our sexuality, this is truly sad. If I am thirsty I don't mind saying it and stating that I need a drink or I am hungry or I am tired so people have to lighten up it is okay to have ones needs filled and I lay it out for my man as he do to me after all we don't read minds.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|I think we are much more uptight about sex than the god who created it. Good one Sissy.|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|In addition to the wisdom expressed here, dear Comfort,
I love the rhythm of your lines. -gene.
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|Erotica is an art form and writing it is not as easy as some may think. True sentiments Comfort.|
|Reviewed by Branch Isole
|Pornography, like beauty, is in the eye of the beholder.
"One (wo)man's trash..."
|Reviewed by A. Jarrell Hayes (Reader)
|"When we feel the need to hide our sexuality, this is truly sad" sums up the poem nicely. Well done.|