A Wintery Afternoon
by Southern Comfort
Sunday, December 28, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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It ia a gray, wintery afternoon,
You build a fire in the fireplace, to warm the cold and gloom.
You want to read, so I lay my head in your lap,
You stroke my hair and I purr like a contented cat.
Just being near you, makes my life complete,
You give me the serenity that I seek.
I feel so warm and safe with my head nestled in your lap,
Soon I drift off, enjoying a cat nap.
Soon I feel your hand slip under my sweater, as it caresses my breast,
Your touch is always welcome, it fills me with happiness.
I feel your awakening need beneath my head,
I know we will be making love soon and the bear rug will be our bed.
You lean down and kiss my eager lips,
I gently stroke your hair with trembling fingertips.
We undress quickly and lay in front of the fire,
Our hands, lips and tongues, ignites passion's desire.
Our need is great, there is no time for delay,
You enter me swiftly, our burning hunger is the magical foreplay.
Outside, Father Winter, howls and beats at the door,
But we are safe and warm in each others arms, on a bear skin rug on the floor.
MUSIC: COOL ARRANGEMENT
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|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Very well written|
|Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
|Lovely, sensual work
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Hey SC, 'But we are safe and warm in each others arms, on a bear skin rug on the floor.
Love that last line...my very wish.Love Holly
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Beautifully sensual, a time to make memories.|
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|Delightful, like cotton candy :) Happy New Year! Michelle|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|I am in need of some Winter lovin...Nice poem SC
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|A true, sumptuous, poetic, smoldering, and enchanted slice of loving life :-)
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|Who needs a fireplace when you can burn like this? Very sexy and hot write, sugar! Just what I needed on this cold morning! Thanks alot, S.C!
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Cozy scene you have created here.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Now this is the kind of winter's day I like.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|It wasn't Father Winter howling at your door! ! !
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Here I am at 4am, can't sleep, but horny as hell...and all I got with me is Rufuz...LOL, Ed|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Very sensual, very visual ~ intimate moments any lovers would enjoy, certainly! Soft and romantic ~ Hugs, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by 000 000
|You go girl!|
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
LOve and Hugs,
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Wow SC this is the kind of wintery day I enjoy. Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Ah, Sweet Comfort, a warm and lovely scene on this Winter's afternoon, beautifully (and disturbingly) depicted. -gene.|