The Magic Of Holding Starlight
by Southern Comfort
Monday, January 05, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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You shall soon visit, we shall tryst in the moonlight,
We will make love, becoming one, hidden by the cloak of night.
The air is balmy, scented with jasmine's powerful musk,
The perfect setting for us to sate our lust.
We will meet in my garden gazebo, to hide from prying eyes,
Far from the maddening crowd, where we won't have to muffle passion's cries.
I wear nothing but rose scent and glitter, so I shimmer in the moonlight,
I will glow for you, like a star in the dark, velvet night.
My long, dark hair is hiding, soft snowy globes, pink nipples await your touch,
The mere thought of you, excites them so very much.
I am reclined on a chaise longue and impatiently wait,
Your tardiness has vexed me, you are late!
Suddenly I hear hurried footsteps, you have finally arrived,
You stand a moment, just gazing, then you rush to my side.
I ignore your presence, my cherry lips do pout,
You realize your lateness has vexed me, what my sullen mood is about.
You kneel beside me, trailing a rose and kisses on my breasts,
You are trying to make amends, to bring me happiness.
Your soft lips asend on mine, in a deep kiss,
As your tongue communes with mine, I lose my will to resist.
I rise and quickly divest you of your clothes,
My hands linger on your body, caressing your maleness that is now exposed.
I gently push you onto the chaise, then use my tongue and lips to ignite a fire,
Your pleasure zones are familiar to me, this knowledge hightens your desire.
You moan with delight, your joy has no measure,
I am the plundering pirate and your body is my treasure.
Soon you are at the point of no return,
You seize me, throwing me onto the chaise, now the table has turned.
You are in a high state of arousal, you ravish my body everywhere,
My excitement urges you on, we are crazed without a care.
Soon our bodies unite, meshed into one,
We are feasting on one another and will feast until lust has won.
As our bodies cling throughout the night,
You whisper," When I hold you, it is magic, it is like holding starlight!"
MUSIC: Oye Mican
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|Reviewed by Silent Dream
|Beautifully expressed SC :)
((Hugs and LOve)) ~DreamyGal
|Reviewed by Lisa Howard
|A great poem, I don't know if you are who I think you are, or if you remember me, but if you do please email me I've missed you. I haveen't started posting yet, but will soon.|
|Reviewed by F Macy
|How very intoxicating! You fill my den with the scent of jasmine and the southern humid night air filled with exciting sexual tension. How very alluring. It was an experience to read and feel your thoughts.
F R Macy
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Let the feasting continue till the break of dawn, wow! Nice to read your work again and hope your Christmas/New Year was one filled with love, hope and a passion for the unexplored....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
A coming together full of rich and erotic detail that is sustained from first to last, right up to that last great line "...it is like holding starlight!"
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
BAM!! This poem rocks!!
LOve and Hugs,
|Reviewed by 000 000
Can you see me blushing?
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|That pirate has found his treasure!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|As always a primal sensuality flows from your erotica...wow
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
What a way you have with yore sexy wording..
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|Oh SC this was simply magical as your writes are. Such a fantastic poem. Love and hugs, Bonnie|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Abracadabra! ! ! with a few EUREKAs too! ! !
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Sweet Comfort, there is indeed magic in your pen. Love, Luv. -gene.|