Sweet Little Death
by Southern Comfort
Tuesday, January 06, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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The air is charged with electricity, there will be no sexual amenities tonight,
Body language screams need, and passion's flame burns bright.
Your look conveys great hunger and I feel the heat,
I know I will be ravaged, once our bodies meet.
Clothes are ripped off, by urgent hands,
Two beasts of passion, face off, no longer just woman or man.
You grab me and growl," Woman!, I want you!, feel my need!"
You place my hand upon your manflower, it is in full bloom and ready to feed.
You kiss me breathless, the intense heat burns my lips,
Your hands urge me ever closer, by my white flesh you grip.
Swiftly you take me, a wild thrust causes our bodies to blend,
I am consumed in the fire that your body sends.
Soon our bodies gyrate in frenzy, Oh Yes, Yes, orgasm, I die the sweet little death!
Soaring on the ultimate high, as the sweet death steals my breath!
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|That "sweet little death" is hard to beat as far as "highs" go. Thanks for sharing, SC. Love and peace and best wishes,
|Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
|SC, I have missed you and your beautiful poems & music. (Hugs) Holly|
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|whoooo weeee! hot and steamy! This rocked my foundation, SC. That's what the BIG O feels like, "little deaths" Great write!|
|Reviewed by Tony Jenkins
|If you gotta go, thats the way to dot it.
|Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary
|A beautiful moment captured forever. Well painted.|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|OHHHHHHH, this ROCKS SC!
As usual you write a charmer!
I feel such Salsa Love Energized!
Passion of the Finest!
Warmest of Blessings of Love and Bright Light, Warrior Gypsy Purple Lady SHEExoo
I hope you are doing GREAT! I haven't heard from you in awhile... in anyway... God Speed! God Bless YOU!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Masterpiece is right. Liz|
|Reviewed by Shea Clarke
|Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
|Sensual and hot, hot, hot. Great write
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|What a beautiful dance.|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Breathless? Hah! Ah, Sweet Comfort, to be a hundred years younger.
Or something. -gene.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|the beauty of the little death
is in the sensuous thoughts of the poetic writer
Love & peace
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Another 'Southern Comfort' poetic masterpiece!!
LOve and Hugs,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|So striking and so true...when the raw fury of just animal lust takes over in the heat of the moment...it is like dying for sure.
|Reviewed by Anze Mofor
|It twisted my brains a litte bit then landed with a breath of unexpected satisfaction. You got me on this one. Its artistic.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Bonnie can't write under a cold shower!
|Reviewed by 000 000
|When I ever need a boost of love- I just read on your den...and my need is no more! LOL|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|I was a bit chilly, but oh my, not any more....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|What a way to die, in the sweet passion of a loved one. Thank you for sharing SC.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|Cold shower time again. WOW SC your beautiful sexual mind amazes me with your AWESOME writes. Love and hugs, Bonnie|